| "Lifes A Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2008 18:53 CDT
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this was pretty ridiculous....
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Title: lame. so lame.
Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....umm, i'm confused. what the hell happened? first kagome's spouting "i love you inuyasha!" in one breath, then "fuck you, die. i refuse to lose to you so i'll just kill you instead." it wasn't even ooc so much as it was just stupid. none of it made any sense. i mean it's ok to write alternate pairings and ooc characters, but when the plot doesn't even connect together, then you have a problem. and you my friend, and i use the term very loosely, have a problem. this was just stupid. i just wasted a good ten minutes of my life reading this.... this wreck of a story. you need to learn how to write well, or at least how to write period.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 22, 2005 10:27 CDT
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What was this??? Kags kills Inu because he made her mad? She gives Sess Tetsusaiga? Yeah right! Get a life, some talent, and a better story. Getting a better story then this shouldn't be that hard.
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Reviewed By: TwilightZone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, but that REALLY sucked! 1. kagome would never evr kill inuyasha, ever 2. why would she go that far? sweet, caring, trusting kagome? no way 3. u should have out an OOC up or something!
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Reviewed By: BradleySpecker On: February 04, 2005 18:58 CST
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tsk tsk making kagome do teh same thing to inuyasha as kikyou did
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Reviewed By: m On: November 23, 2004 19:58 CST
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don't get how kagome loves him then kills him
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Reviewed By: Missy Manda On: September 19, 2004 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dont mind wat the other people all said i like this fic and think u should keep writing...those other p[eople r all jsut jealous they dont have ur talent:P
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Sarudonifu(Saru 4 short) On: July 28, 2004 21:40 CDT
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... idont know what's up with all the flames, i think this story is really good, and im a pyro when it comes to reviewing.
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Reviewed By: hmmm On: June 19, 2004 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story didn't draw me in at all...you abused the "sit" too much and it hade a lame ending.
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Title: U suck at writing and life
Reviewed By: A inu fan On: May 25, 2004 18:40 CDT
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ok fuck head HAVE U EVERY SEEN THE SHOW, I CAN SEND U A COUPLE EPISODES BECAUSE KAGOME WOULD NEVER I HER RIGHT MIND TAKE AIM AND FIRE HER EVIL PURIFING ARROW AT INUYASHA NOR CAN SESS USE THE TETSIAGA YPOU DUMB FUCKED UP PIECE OF SHIT WHORE PS: MIZu U ARE THE DUMBEST BITCH TO EVER BE BORN ON THIS MUDBALL PLANET MY KEYBOARD IS SMARTER THAT YOU SO IS MY SHIT! and to the others who said u and ur fic sucked balls they are the smartest people alive
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Reviewed By: stiffmeister On: January 31, 2004 01:18 CST
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IT FECKING SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Razor Blade Magarita [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was classic. to the person who said it sucks. it would have ruined the entire plot if there was a warning about it. that was bad ass dude.^_^ Ja ne
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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:02 CST
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Sorry but this fic really sucked. You should have put a warning or sum10 at the beggining of the chapter, sum10 like ***Warning***: Sess/Kag , a character dies in story, Kagome is evil.*** sum10 like that just to let us know to expect and evil kagome, (evil cause she killed the man she was supposed to love) To let us know it's a Sess/Kag fic... or at least close to one... cause ya know, she was being all nice to him and everything. And to let us know that one of the characters die. well, lets think. We know the story is mainly bout inu and kagome, but there has to be sess in there sumwhere, cause its a sess/kag fic. So only three characters. Inu, Kag, Sess. Its a Kag/Sess fic so one can predict that those two characters are going to live. And the only other character in the story is Inu. So one can also predict that inu is going to die. So therefore people can kinda figure out for themselves if they think the fic will suck or not and they wont have to read the thing, figuring out they dont like it and cry cause of the messed up bull shit fic! I have OCD. It's a disorder. I have trouble keeping images and other things I read and see and think about out of my head. It will take me a week to get over this. A week at the LEAST. a month at the most. And I'm a very emotional person when it comes to death and pain and love...things like that. This is why i gave up reading library books. I read the giver a few weeks back. I got worked up cause jonas had to leave his family behind and the giver's daughter killed herself and all that. Not much to get worked up about huh? Yeah well, I have problems... Please edit the chapter and put in a warning or sum10 so people know what to expect. Oh, And I would give you a Rating and everything... but There's no '0' in the drop down list. Just 1-10. Hmm...
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Reviewed By: Mizu no Megami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fucking sweet! Sess/Kag!!! YAY!!!! Kinda OCC, but i was prepared!!! Lol. I like this story more than...*sob* COFFEE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Fang On: September 20, 2003 21:40 CDT
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weird acting characters. weird plot. weird ending. weird story. what can i say it ws odd. |
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