| "Spring fever (Revised version)" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice... I've never seen someone write about the up the ass trick while giving head... I liked the story. you may wish to know the lovely apendage that is located in your mouth is spelled 'tongue' not 'tong'. Tong is the salad serving thingy...
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Reviewed By: moon daughter On: October 02, 2004 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it a lot
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Reviewed By: LiLNeko On: August 27, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was the bomb..now all u need is another one like that except with seshomaru and kagoem if u don't mind ..put that was the bomb. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
excellent! That took guts and emotions I admire you for that! Please e-mail me back! GothgirlVA@aol.com
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was on of the best lemon fanfics i have ever read!! brava!! brava!! brava!! *throws confetti* lalalalala....awesum job!! i give it 5 thumbs up!!-er i mean 10 fingers up...no still duznt sound rite...oh well! goooood job! did the color thing work?
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Reviewed By: fangirlofiunyasha On: January 15, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: boom boom On: November 14, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it was one of the best fanfics I've ever read before it has all the elements that I enjoy on a fanfic. It has a great begining and a great end. I loved it and enjoyed reading it. good job.
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Reviewed By: Julie K. On: July 08, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. The ending was very cute. I hope you do a sequel. It'd be fun to see the future couple. Nice job! |
Reviewed By: dude On: June 30, 2003 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT story i wish u had another chapter but ok it's still good |
Reviewed By: Keitaro(nickname) On: June 05, 2003 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pretty good, compared to some of the fan fics I've read before. I read a lot of f.f.s, and most aren't as good as others. This one was a better one compared to others, and I'll be back to read it again. |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was well done. ^^ I really liked the ending. It put a neat spin on it. |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was well doe. ^^ I really liked the ending. It put a neat spin on it. |
Reviewed By: great job! On: March 10, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job!
I like the ending, and how you did a three-day time span! ^_^ really really good fic, and I hope you write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 09, 2003 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The ending was great, especially with Inu Yasha and Kagome at the end. Great Idea. The only part I felt was sorta bad was the part when he told she was in heat and she said that he was her source, something like that? I'd fix that, because It gave me the wrong thought, just advice, and I apoligise if I sould like a bitch. |
Reviewed By: Diane On: March 10, 2003 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not tong it's tongue, it seems to be the most misspelled word in most fics. Other than that I enjoyed it. Wouldn't mind seeing a sidefic or a few sequels. |
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