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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Eliwoodsluv [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... a couple of grammer errors here and there, but over all... so very nummy. ^-^ You kept the characters in good character, which is an important part to fanfics. Keep on doing what you are and look over your work, you will find those simple but silly mistakes. Not intended to be a flame, just giving advice.
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Reviewed By: Inuryoukai On: November 28, 2004 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Helle. You haven't written anything on this fanfics in over a year. Write more already! Keep the story going!
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Reviewed By: Darkness Angel.com On: November 26, 2004 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story I think I drooled all the way through it. I haven't seen a Ryou/Seto pairing before and I am VERY glad your fanfics is the first one of them that I've read. Please, KEEP WRITING!!
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Reviewed By: Mika_Kitty666 On: August 12, 2004 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods that was great!!! I like MJ. She's cruel, sadistic, evil, cruel-wait I said that didn't I? Oh well, the sequel sounds good, though, and I like the sexy yaoi part.
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Title: OMFG!!!
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
firstly, write sequel. secondly, don't leave such evil cliffies! i love story, but i don't want ryou dead. you're such a good writer... I love your stories.
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Reviewed By: Flicker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Waii! This is a really good fic! I mean, normally Yu-Gi-Oh isn't my most favorite anime, but you reminded me why I like it *gathers bishie into arms and hugs happily* ^__^ Sequel? Please? Soon? Cliffhanger shi-ne! Lol
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Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHH you guys are sooo good! im adding you to my favorite fan fic authors! I loved this fic but you left me kind of hanging at the end though.That was MJ right?why is it the END!!!!WHY!!!
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Reviewed By: The Chaotic Ones [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you tell we are starting to like your storys? We like this... but which one is the seqel?
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Reviewed By: Savara On: September 29, 2003 23:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Savara here! I love your stories! As you wished I am reviewing. For every time I don't review that means that I'm reading it a lot more! Did I forget to mention, I love your Fanfics?
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Reviewed By: rhea On: September 23, 2003 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
know what?...... i hate u right now.... and i liked her in the beginning too, now..... shes just being cruel, i mean come on, i could understand bugging bakura, but not the other, its just mean, she needs to be locked in an insane asylum or something(then again so do i when my other comes out, so i can say something) so there.... write the sequal and tell us what its called cya
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Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwww I liked it, I got a little confused about what was actually going on in the lemon scene though. ^_^;; It's late- I'm tired. And jeez, no matter what a woman does, a man shouldn't hit her! *shakes finger* |
Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 11:23 CDT
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*laughing histerically* I think that I could get along with MJ and Mere!!!!! heee heee! They sound like the type of people that I hang around!!!
Oh and for the record, I'm still trying to find a way to get the librarian to let me use the computers for a couple hours but I don't think she's buying into the whole "I'll lock up for her." thing. ^_^U Oh well, Until I can get to a computer for a few hours, I won't be posting anymore updates. *Waiting for someone to sound disappointed* ... *crickets chirping* -_-U now that was degrading... |
Reviewed By: Mineko and her Yami! On: April 30, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mineko: Oh... my... gods... Notimetoreviewmustgoreadsequel!
Yami M.: *sweatdrop* I hate it when you do that...
Mineko: *points an accusing finger at the computer screen* Did you actually READ that?! I don't understand how you can be CALM at a time like this!
Yami M.: *sigh* It's this little thing called 'self control.' Maybe if you try really hard you might actually be able to do it someday.
Mineko: OoooooOOOOoooooh that sounded wrong! Mwuhahahahaha!
Yami M.: *quickly changing the subject* So what the hell DID you say earlier, anyway?
Mineko: Notimetoreviewmustgoreadsequel.
Yami M.: *sweatdrop* Should have seen it coming...
Mineko: Oh btw, sorry if this gets submitted twice; my computer's been acting weird today; don't ask...
Yami M.: Why-
Mineko: You know, this is getting kind of repetitive...
Yami M.: What?
Pause.
Both: *Catfight* |
Reviewed By: Mineko and her Yami On: April 30, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mineko: Oh... my... gods... Notimetoreviewmustgoreadsequel!
Yami M.: *sweatdrop* I hate it when you do that...
Mineko: *points an accusing finger at the computer screen* Did you actually READ that?! I don't understand how you can be CALM at a time like this!
Yami M.: *sigh* It's this little thing called 'self control.' Maybe if you try really hard you might actually be able to do it someday.
Mineko: OoooooOOOOoooooh that sounded wrong! Mwuhahahahaha!
Yami M.: *quickly changing the subject* So what the hell DID you say earlier, anyway?
Mineko: Notimetoreviewmustgoreadsequel.
Yami M.: *sweatdrop* Should have seen it coming... |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 10, 2003 12:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a sexy kiss between seto and ryou..*author drools and grabs Bakura* I NEED....PAPERCLIPS!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs into supply closet*
YD Reaction: Not again!
Bakurasgirl: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! |
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