| "I Hate You" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rikoh On: February 11, 2004 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am obsessed with Ryou and I loved it! PLEASE continue! The suspense is killing me! I loved the way it was formated, with his thoughts and the other people talking. So PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue!
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Title: Rain and Fire
Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 09, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, Please, Please do another chapter!!!!!! I love it and I want to find out what happens next!!!!I keep reading it over and over again countless times, it's really amazing, and I love how you made Ryou talk to himself!!!
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Reviewed By: Ford Prefect [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 19:33 CST
Comment/Review:
DUDE!!!! DO ANOTHER CHPATER!!! I LIKE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Suffering_Soul On: December 06, 2003 15:44 CST
Comment/Review:
YES!YES!YES! Do another chappie please! Either about :what happens next and what Ryou does to himself / Bakura talking to Ryou about why he did it / or the story again from Bakura's point of view. anything, just soon!
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Reviewed By: Chibi Neko On: October 06, 2003 18:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Coolness! I would really like to read another chapter. As soon as my sister stops throwing crap at me.
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Reviewed By: joeyrules [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 19:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG...very sad. ::sobs:: But keep it going.
later
Emily |
Reviewed By: jean On: July 28, 2003 16:39 CDT
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i was trying soooo hard to not cry yes please write more i want to know what happens!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 22:26 CDT
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Oh yea, I forgot to emphasize: PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE? |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 22:22 CDT
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I agree with Queen of Angst. Plus, I've been there before myself so I can relate, I think everyone feels that way at one point or another. Great story, I do think that Ryou blames himself for everything (like Bakura's beatings) |
Reviewed By: MadameRuby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!! SO SAD! reminds me of when I felt that way about myself... *shivers* glad that's over with... I have great friends to help me get through feelings like that now. ^^ keep up the great work, and please put in another chapter! this fic just begs for one!
Madame Ruby, insane authoress extraordinaire |
Reviewed By: ElderWhisp [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 10:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another chappie! |
Reviewed By: Queen of Angst On: April 16, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!!!!Pleaaase do another chapter! please? I love Ryou torture and this is one of the best!I love how you make it seem like Ryou is talking to himself, and is talking in his head! Keep writing!:D |
Reviewed By: ShadowStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This....was... amazing! You have to do another chapter! I beg you! Granted, the formatting just about gave me an ulcer (it did make it more confusing though, that was cool), but I loved it! I think you've just inspired me to do a Ryou angst fic of my own! :-) Wonderful! |
Reviewed By: darkangel On: May 11, 2003 09:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fic! I really like the style of the writing and I don't have to put up with a billion spelling mistakes! Angst is also my favourite type of fics, and I like Ryou so much I wanna hurt him!^_^You do a great job at that! PLEASE do another chapter! |
Reviewed By: Twin Dragon On: May 11, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is AMAZING!I've read it-like-a billion times! I strongly encourage you to do another chapter, because this fic RULES! I never thought a suicide fic could be so cool! I find it really cool how you made him talk to himself!^_^ so funny! Keep it up! |
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