| "Lips Sealed" Reviews/Comments [ 164 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kaos Stormreaver On: March 13, 2003 16:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to write more. If you don't write more I will hunt you down and shave your cat. And if you have no cat I will give you one and then shave it. |
Reviewed By: DreamStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 20:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add more on to this story. It's killing me..PPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLllEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE. Why kill people with fic's like this. |
Reviewed By: demon On: March 12, 2003 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how cau u do to me im about to die now from reading this story and u end it well if u go to school like me and they give homework and test alot i understand but u better finish it !_!by the way this is not a flame.(i think im going to die) |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 14:55 EST
Comment/Review:
DAMN!!! O_O THIS IS GOOD!!!
I need more!!! *twitch* I need more!!! AHHH!!! *runs around in circles going insane*
Please, please, PLEASE continue AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
*Twitches, spazing out from the sexy evilness that is her favorite dog demon, Inu-Yasha...*
EEEE!!!! XD |
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 On: March 12, 2003 09:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there are no words to say how fun that was to read but next time don't tease me I think I might die...*if it was me I would have told Sango to go back to camp* |
Reviewed By: mikky_2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 21:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have no words to say. JUST NO WORDS.
Its fantastically written... |
Reviewed By: Rei Lin Wu On: March 11, 2003 19:43 EST
Comment/Review:
wow I....I can't explain what I felt when I read this story. However don't you dare stop here. You can't leave everyone hanging. FINISH WHAT YOU STARTED It was really good and I can't describe the feeling. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Cataluna On: March 11, 2003 19:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such an evil puppy! *growls* finish this soon or else! |
Reviewed By: mishisama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 17:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!! that was ........ WOW!!! oh Please pleas please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: jubilation15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 15:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woah, woah, woah, you better continue with this story, it was AMAZING |
Reviewed By: inulover On: March 10, 2003 22:31 EST
Comment/Review:
dam that was good but what else can we expect from you but the best and with that said you must finish the story |
Reviewed By: Jean On: March 10, 2003 22:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to finish! You just can't keep me hanging here. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Janine [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are just so, SO cruel. Now I understand why they call you the evil puppy.
I hope there will be a sequel. PLEASE! *get's down on knees* PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUEL! |
Reviewed By: Saya415 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 19:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Fucking goddamn sonofaBITCH!!
" is right!!!! I have a few more choice words than that to describe how I felt when you ended there.
As always you put out quality work, my kawaii koinu-chan. However, if you don't get this finished in the next week and a half I'll have to fly out to where you live and hurt you ^_^ The beautiful thing about this threat is the fact I actually do know where you live and have the means to get there.. ^________^v Now be a good puppy and don't keep your fans waiting for the delicious lemony ending! |
Reviewed By: Chibionna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 17:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it sooo much! One of the best lemons I've ever read and I have read a lot. I hope you write a sequal or another chapter.
~Chibi |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 10, 2003 15:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always Ookami, your fic is a beyond words. As it is with all of your fics. But PLEASE, do us, your biggest fans, a fav and continou with this fic instead of it being a one-shot. You have such talent it is unreal. So PLZ..update with a ch 2 or 3 or....well, lets just say I hope you get the idea. ^_^
-Onimsha- |
Reviewed By: Katrina Marie On: March 12, 2003 14:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*chokes on her salad* Gwah! KYAA! You ended it there?! Oh God, Ookami-sama, that was fucking great TT;... You're my favourite author! *strokes* ^_^!!! I gotta question, is Iredescent Dreams back up yet TT;...? And have you updated 'Turnabout is Fair Play'? That story's my fucking favourite... I stayed up and read for six hours straight the whole fucking thing. You're amazing. |
Reviewed By: wow! great fic On: March 10, 2003 14:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what?!! It was ookami-chan who wrote this? That explains everything! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: wow! great fic On: March 10, 2003 14:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was soooo good! Great writing style and spelling/grammar. It was really original, especially the ending. Normally I would have been screaming at you for ending it that way, but then it would be too much like all the other fics. ^_^ one of the best lemons I have ever read, and I can only hope you write a sequel for it! ta ta! |
Reviewed By: kookie On: March 10, 2003 12:42 EST
Comment/Review:
@_@! wowza! you write them very well :) |
Reviewed By: lere On: March 10, 2003 10:22 EST
Comment/Review:
YOU CAN NOT DO THAT TO US!!!!!!!How can you just end the story like THAT?????!!!! If you donīt make a sequel you'r dead my friend, understand?!
Just a jok. He, he. But pleeeeeaaseeeee?! Pupy eyes... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 09:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh heh! Sometimes being evil can be so good!
Well this one's going to keep me awake in class... |
Reviewed By: paulina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 05:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice |
Reviewed By: Himiko On: March 10, 2003 04:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* kawaii puppy....you sooo better finish this or im gonna come after you with a blow torch!! *ultra huggles* its fab!!! XD
Imouto-chan ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jumpjetcity On: March 11, 2003 11:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! That is so hot. I can't wait for the next chapter. One of the best lemons I've read in a long time. |
Reviewed By: Cold Fire Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 20:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The apparent rage is to have tens across the board. . . Baaah. Baaaaah. So I'm part of the damned flock, but the evilness of your 'one-shot' is supreme. You're right - You can't write a one-shot. Everyone's after your throat after the first paragraph. The devoted followers, ni? *howling of random animals kicks in* Hear that? It's the frustration of your lemon-lovin' followers and the commencing of many evil thoughts leading to an imminent torturing. I think it goes without saying that this is as much fun (If not more) than your other writings. And much more evil. =^.~= If the buggings of your many fans cannot provoke you into further writing on this *delicious* story, their threats may. I leave the huggles to those others and merely send my assurances that you will somehow appease all of us rabid fanchildren out there in netherspace. In the meanwhile, we shall be enchanted by the balance of action, dialouge, description, and citrus. To 'waste not is to want not', and not a word of yours is wasted. Not that we aren't left wanting, nor are the frustrated couple left satsified either. Hmm. . .
Laters!
Zuki! Or rather: Phoenix of the Cold Fire. |
Reviewed By: Elora On: March 21, 2003 22:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry.. former English major me has to break the cycle.. I did catch a few nits here and there in word usage, but they're minor.
That being said...
I posted on the ID message board, now I'll review here.. please, please, please, please, PLEASE finish the story! Or continue it! Or SOMETHING!! We're all waiting here with breathless anticipation, as frustrated as Kagome and Inu Yasha. Please don't listen to Kayla and be truly, truly horrible to leave us hang like this! But please also take enough time to make it as wonderful as the first part! Please? Pretty please? I'll beg, I'll plead.. I'd bribe, but I'm poor. ;_; PLEASE?!?!? |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu On: March 20, 2003 15:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEVVVVVVVVVVIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ARE SOOO EEEEVIL!!!PLZ continue!! If you don't I'll sick my friend's evil husband on you! BE AFRAID!! Ah well, never mind. my friend just killed him. Hmm... no more threat... Um... I'LL GIVE YOU 1,000 YEN IF YOU WRITE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 03, 2003 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn you and damn sango for interupting then |
Reviewed By: Hime- Chan On: April 15, 2003 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I loved this! Ooooo! But you better finish this you! Lol.... And if you don't do it soon I'm SO gonna get you for it! Lol but anyways love the story UPDATE NOW!!!!!! |
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