| "Lips Sealed" Reviews/Comments [ 164 ] |
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Title: Teddy Bear
Reviewed By: Teddy Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I have ever reviewed this fic Ookami-chan and if not, I don't know why I wouldn't have. The raw sexual emotion blatantly screaming from this oneshot is amazing, so much so that I remember it vividly after reading it so long ago. It was one of those fics that completely stood out in my mind, and trust me, it takes a lot for that to happen. I have literally read hundreds and I only reserve slots in my memory for the best, which evidently yours was. I loved how it was written and I don't think I've ever been so frustrated by a cliffhanger before. The way they spoke and what they would have done to each other was very evident and there is no doubt in my mind that the actual lemon would be INCREDIBLE!!!! That's what mainly motivated me to write this. I and certainly all of your adoring fans would greatly appreciate it you wrote the second part to "Lips Sealed" as it was shown on the fic that the present chapter was part one. I anxiously anticipate it and I hope that you consider to do it. It would be a long awaited treat of mine. Continue to feel inspired and I hope I have convinced you.
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 15:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
this was really good please make a sequel
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 01:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That was an amazing fic! It had me anticipating the part where they'd finally get what they wanted..you're so evil! lol. I love your style of writing, and Inuyasha was in character - the way he was treating Kagome was really hot. I loved the part where Sango came looking for Kagome..."fucking god damn sonofaBICTH!" xD
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Reviewed By: la89801 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 06:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... wonderfully done. The way you wrote InuYasha in this one almost scared me. But in a good way.. if that's possible. Heh. Anyway, I loved it. I hope to see more for it soon.
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 18:12 EDT
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Holy shit! That was fucking amazing! I swear, you write the longest and the HOTTEST lemons I have ever read. You have more talent than I could ever hope to have. Amazing work!
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Title: Whoa....
Reviewed By: CrystalEyed Yasha[not logged in) On: April 06, 2007 09:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, you really do need to type up a sequel that'll let them finish. It even had me thinking "Whoa..." Seriously.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Galalectra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 15:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG u have to write a sequl if u havent already i need to know what happens and all please i beg of you...im so freaking wet that i cant help it I NEED THAT SEQUAL!! how could you just leave it there, im shaking with how excited i am please please please i really wanna know what happens to kags next, omg please i beg you please put up the sequal i loved this please.
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Reviewed By: would rather not say as I am embarassed I got so f*ing hot On: March 16, 2007 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HO...LY... FUCK! OMG!THAT WAS THE FUCKING HOTTEST THING EVER! I can't belive you.. left it there.. oh gods..I'm about to fucking cum in my pants. Sorry.. u didn't need to know that..damn. I am a chick btw just wanted to let u know. AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 23:56 EDT
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oh my god!!!!!! frickin a!
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Title: Aya...
Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 13:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
You left the story half finished, or mayby even 1/3 finished since Kagome didn't get a good chance to enjoy her finish ;) Come back and finish the other half! Please? *begs* And what about Turnabout is Fair Play? I saw that on FF.net and it was finished, or was it AFF.net? I saw it on one of those and when I was referred to you (fan art for Unexpected Opportunities) I was like "hey, there were more then 14 chapters when I saw it before... what happened?"
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 01:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another recommend here. Most excellent. Very sensual, stimulating, dark, and highly erotic. This was something I could actually envision, Absolutely loved it.
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 15:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story!! It was so good. You have to make a sqeul, I have to read what Inuyasha does next to Kagome.
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Title: SEQUEL!!!!
Reviewed By: Jozu Oruha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2006 01:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! I really liked it when you made a forceful and dark character. You have to make a sequel, you just can't end it there!! We need more!!!
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Reviewed By: Inukag_obsession [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2006 15:58 EST
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Ohhhhhhh, gooood, good god!! Talk about porn this is just soo good!! Theres gonna be more right?? PLzz, make there be more!! And fast!! Im as wet as hell, cold shower needed...now!!
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Reviewed By: xYour_Last_Chancex [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 13:19 EST
Comment/Review:
omg, r u gonna add more? Its really good. Definantly needs more though. :0) 2 thumbs up
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