| "Rei Ayanami: Fallen Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Enrique On: April 14, 2003 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it wrong 4 me 2 masturb8 over the sex parts in this story/ i hope my mom she doesnt catch me thatd be bad pls keep makign chps pece out |
Reviewed By: League of Jewish Skinheads On: April 11, 2003 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I've rated you as best I can. 7 for style, which is smooth but utilitarian, a 9 because you're pretty thorough and an 8 because I've never seen anything like this in a public forum. As regards enjoyment...was this really written to be enjoyed? Still, it's difficult not to laugh at the protest you've managed to excite among the more slavish Evangelion fans and on that level I can certainly appreciate what you're doing. The League of Jewish Skinheads has no overall rating to offer, but try to look surprised if you're nominated for a Takoball Award this year. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: April 10, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo muthafucka, ya better update this shit realfast. This is like some dope to my sick head.
Now here did I put my Bible BlaCK series...... |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: March 20, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It gets better and better. |
Reviewed By: Cavalier On: March 14, 2003 14:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, you rock! This is the most fucked up fanfic I have ever read (I mean that in a good way) and your writing style is great. I know your probably getting a load of flames for this fic, but just remember that everyone has their own definition of what a fanfic is, so as long as you think its a fanfic, and at least one person enjoys it, the things been a success. Keep up the scary work! |
Reviewed By: darkk_angel On: March 12, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an awesome fanfic... do keep writing! the emotions which you have conveighed in this piece are shocking (in the best way possible) and please excuse my spelling:) |
Reviewed By: [NPH] On: March 12, 2003 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:monocle: |
Reviewed By: harvman85 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Sick, Disgusted, perverted and basically Wrong. I have read hundreds of fan fics, and i have never once before stopped reading a story in disgust. Based on your writing style i would have to say you have Severe psychological problems. I do not see this fic as a darkfic or angstie fic or even a romance fic. I see it as a very disturbed author writing down his sick, disgusting fantasies so the whole world can see how much of a clown he is. a fanfic is supposed to be a tribute to the article of media it was spawned from "ie: NGE" and you have made a mockery of the series and its fans and fanfic authors everywhere. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous Assasin On: March 16, 2003 09:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn.....this is the rapefic I am looking for years. Youre da MAN. Shit, this is better than any shitass hentai I ever watched. Screw those conservatives assholez. Those faggots can shove their 2cm dicks into a cow for all I care. And you.......write on!!!!! |
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