| "Shadows of The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 16:45 CST
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Hey bakurasgirl, I'm back! And I know I've thanked u before, but still, thank u so much for writing the lemon so that I don't miss anything. Anyway, the new chapters kawaii, I really love how u portray Aria. She's so cute! And as for the Aten kid, his description sorta sounds like Malik, could it be him? If so, then awesome. Well, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: February 06, 2004 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeahhhhhhhh!!!..... That's the only word for it.... except.... MARIK + BAKURA + BAKURASGIRL'S WRITING= FRIENDSHIP!!!!! And happiness.... but FRIENDSHIP!!!! * Hugs you reaaaaly tightly* Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: February 05, 2004 23:20 CST
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Awwww coolness! Great lemon! Back to back! and its all good..sure the water is cummy but hey its still water..its all good int he nighborhood...had to put that little funny bit in there! good chapter..now theyre all together and yeah..*sighs*
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 29, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoot whoot, they got the loot! *does booty bump with them* now get to the freakin'..muwhahaha...happiness is coming back to me..yay! who knew stealing could be so much fun *raise hand* me!!!!
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Reviewed By: valea On: January 29, 2004 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww....say it marik my man say it! *drools over thinking of bakrua kneeling naked in front of fire* heh heh...that was good...poor marik and bakura...get toegther! lets get together yeah yeah yeah *sings theme song for cool fic*
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 29, 2004 19:58 CST
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EEEEEKKKKKK!!! EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!! :( * pouts and hold onto 4 Plushies.* Well.... here you go. One Ancient Bakura Plushie, One Ancient Marik Plushie, ( Oddly enough... his name was Amos in Egypt....O-o) one Aria in Egyptian clothes * awwww!!!* and one Anubis Plushie..... so Bakura, Marik, and Aria can decapitate it!!!!! Yeah Decapitating!!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 16:51 CST
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*smirks* I know what u have in mind, Bakurasgirl. I must say, when that prophecy comes to pass, Bakura will be very shocked. Anyway, nice escape from the tombs, slightly bloody and stuff but I liked it. And if the next chapter is a M/B lemon, plz warn me. Like I said, I get creeped out by M/B stuff. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 10:46 CST
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Hey, it's been a while since I've reviewed, huh? Well anyway, all of the chps that I've catched up on are very...interesting. *cough, cough* But I love the last chapter, it was so awesome how Bakura was praying to the gods. And I'm sorry, but I'm not a big fan of Marik/Bakura. I dunno why, but I get creeped out by it. Anyway, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 26, 2004 23:06 CST
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Awww!!! Soooooo sweet! I'm defidently ( sorry, no spell check... baka OS9) forgiving you now... poor Marik.... yet... happy Marik! ...so confused!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 21, 2004 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you! Justice is served and now I feel happy! Thats what the bastard gets! I am soo enjoying this hopeuflly my comp will cooperate now. Oohh...and could it be? Next chapter, an orgy of some sort? dun dun dun.... RIP for Kesi...!
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Reviewed By: Malik lover and Anzu Basher On: January 20, 2004 20:32 CST
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Yeah!!!! That was soooo good! I just sat down and read all 12 chapters in half an hour.... IT WAS SOOOOOOOO WORTH IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: January 20, 2004 09:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright im on the school computer now because mine is out of order again so i cant read the next chapter now and whatnot. But anywho this was full of adventure and deciving i give it too thumbs up! hehe...damn guy..just had to rat him out meanie but when i get the time i cant wait to see what they do for new management that willl be a real treat!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bastard! *hisses at him* but it was cool like a fool not to say anything is foolish. yay! see it always has to be his..what other kind of albinos area around with white hair at the time?! itsa happy thing i was digging it...*sighs somewhat content* Marik learning the trade of the thief..good stuff man..
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Reviewed By: The Red Wind On: January 10, 2004 19:18 CST
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The sweet gift of a child for a Bakura Itemri. Quite thrilling, is it not? I do hope Bakura will be able to keep anything from happening to Aria(I am prosuming this is Aria?) for as long as he is there.
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Reviewed By: The Red Wind On: January 01, 2004 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yet another enjoyable fiction away from your other current fiction - Hosile Takeover. And, for long story short, this too, was very well writen. I wish you luck, and no writer's block while you contine with it.
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