| "Like Mars" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr On: August 02, 2003 23:39 CDT
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Dude this fic is off the hook. I cant wait to read more. onegai update sOoN,OR eles..... just playing but I would like to read some more of your fic sOoN... arigatou
Ja ne fo now .. good luck =p |
Reviewed By: Kagura-Hime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, great fic! i absolutly LOVE mars, it's one of my favorite mangs! (besides ranma 1/2, & inuyasha of course) i was actually thinking of writing a fic like this, except i couldn't see inu screwing every woman in the school, & seeing kagome so shy, so i would make it a miroku/sango mostly. with inu as tatsuya (or however it's spelled) & kag harumi (same goes for this 1) i'd make naraku masao &... AHH i better stop while i still have some secrets left! well, anyway, what happened to kira in the book? i only read books 2-7 (it's all my library had. pricks) & i don't think they tell you until maybe book 8 or 9. i dunno, just please write more to love sucks, & finish it (i love that one to)so you can write more to this one!pretty please?
always~kagura-hime aka jen
ps~if ya ever wanted to chat, feel free to mail me! |
Reviewed By: bleedingwings666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 16:30 CDT
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i havent read the fic but that is a competejip off mars
isent that coppywrited |
Reviewed By: Angelwater8 On: June 14, 2003 03:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I would have never thought of a cross over with Mars. I love Mars and I just recently started collecting it. Um...just a few suggestions: Maybe to make your chapters longer you could actually put in what they're thinking instead of saying it yourself. Somnething like:
Inu Yasha sat down in his chair and looked over to Kagome who was blushing in the corner.
"Didn't I meet her somewhere before?"
Instead of: Inu Yasha sat down in his chair and looked over to Kagome who was blushing in the corner. Then he remembered meeting her somewhere before.
Keep up the good work! Well, update soon...look forward to reading more in this fic! |
Reviewed By: KITTEN On: June 08, 2003 06:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL I LIKED IT!!! |
Reviewed By: lia On: June 02, 2003 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!!! i so love all ur fics! i read every single on of them! pl and plz continue with it coz i really liked it and im sure all the others loves it as much as i do!! later! luv ya |
Reviewed By: missblu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEEZ WRITE MORE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Meg-Chan On: March 12, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, Write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Suzaku no Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Normally i'm not big on AU but for some reason the summary drew me in.. it's really good! Update soon, ja? |
Reviewed By: Kagome4ever! On: March 12, 2003 12:39 CST
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I love it! keep going! |
Reviewed By: Ame Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool idea, hmmm... Kagome as the quiestest person? I can imagine that. Can't say how much I'm begining to love this fic so... Continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Kagome3112 On: March 11, 2003 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey girl it's me kagome3112...I really love your last fic love suck please hurry up and finish it I love it so much..any-wayz really like this story too I bet it will turn out fantastic as well as love sucks....I reccomend if you read love sucks you wont wanna storp reading any-thing that this girl has written...she's a really really good writter in my opinion!
~kagome3112
please update soon~~~~~ |
Reviewed By: pure drivel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 10:22 CST
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Pure Drivel:Dude! I like reviewing!
I think it's a fun idea write more soon! |
Reviewed By: azn_otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 22:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always wanted to read some sort of Mars fusion! I really think you should continue this soon because I would like to see what happens next! Mars is one of my all time favorite mangas and InuYasha is pretty high on the list too! |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: March 11, 2003 22:17 CST
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hey is this going to have a galatea concept? it's the greek myth where this painter hates women and makes one of his own and aphrodite helps him. it kinda sounds like that. this fanfic is good so far. |
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