| "Fixation" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: mlo90 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2016 01:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that's one of my favorite stories, period. very plausible, VERY hot
and simply captivating. and the ending... maaan, gets me every
time! thank you for sharing
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Reviewed By: marlene_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2011 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like a lot all the psicological part. The way vegeta fucks with bulma is very realistic. I like a lot! However, i would prefer that the story had been more long. Maybe with more thoughts and more intense erotic situations :D as i have said the psico of the characters is very great! congratulations! |
Reviewed By: fyrechylde (not logged in) On: April 22, 2005 02:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautifully written! I love the way you end your chapters with something akin to the punchline of a great joke. Thank you, thank you, thank you(!) for not going into the whole "love thing" in this story. It made it seem more in character and more realistic between these two.
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Reviewed By: Ominous Prophecy On: November 04, 2003 13:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. Just wish it was a bit longer, but oh well, it's still great.
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Reviewed By: Ginia On: July 11, 2003 13:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very unique get together! Quite entertaining. |
Reviewed By: Heather On: May 03, 2003 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just read over this story for the 6th time. I can't get enough of it! Please make a sequel!! Please! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 13:13 PDT
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I like the way your writing flows, so unique and fresh. And your right it started out as lust of course. The LOVE didnt come For a long time after. But you know its there. So there goes the tale of a beautiful genius and handsome warrior prince. Great fic! Bura400 |
Reviewed By: Heather On: April 10, 2003 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing...absolutely amazing. The way your words flow together is incredible. The sentences are so simple and easy, making it almost mystical. You HAVE to write more fics...i'm telling you, you're good! Please e-mail me if you decide to do that to inform me of when they're to come out...my e-mail is Magikleme@aol.com. I've never read anything that has your unique type of writing...it's really pleasing. And you don't overdue the passion that Bulma and Vegeta share, the lemons are sweet and not so hard-core like most are...it's really refreshing. Great job! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 17:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Why did it have to be over Shit!!!!
I guess its right all good things must go to an end !
Keep of the good work I cant wait for your next work.
Later! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 16:42 PDT
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How did I miss this jem until today? I loved it. Your take on their relationship was outstanding. |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 14:01 PST
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whoa...... awsome..... very differnt i like it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 12, 2003 16:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again magnificent I just hope that you'll continue it where you left on ff.net ^^ |
Reviewed By: Millie On: March 12, 2003 14:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Megumi On: March 11, 2003 16:14 PST
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hi!! I read this fic at ff.net and it is withput doubts my favourite.. I can't get bored of reading it over and over it is amazing ...
I like the way you wrote this I really love it I don't know how to express my self in words...
Just Incredible
Update soon |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: March 11, 2003 14:10 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good start, though not enough info or description.
There will be a 2nd chapter, right? |
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