| "Pain and Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Faye89 On: March 14, 2003 09:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, that was very good for a first lemon. Thank you for the cookie!!!! *munches* Keep up the great writing! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TAHNK U LOVED THE LEMON AND THE MORE U DO THE MORE ME AND MY SYCHOSELF LOVE U !
*YUP THAT ROCKED ! DO IT AGAIN*
>:D
LATER!
UPDATE SOONN! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 16:16 CST
Comment/Review:
drool.......mmmmm nice lemon... can't wait for more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DetenYai On: March 12, 2003 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUUUUPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Raven69 On: March 12, 2003 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic so far. Please update soon and put some lemon or lime in it because i'm a hentai!!! |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: March 12, 2003 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouu..thunderstorms are soooo sexy..just righ for a lil lemon *wink wink* Great chapters so far. Waaaay better than anything I've ever written.
Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH I WANTT TO KNOW WHAT HHAPPPENNNSSSSSSSS!! Hey you r doing great I love it its well writen. UPDATE SOON OK !
*Hello im sycho NSBVEGETA and I must say this II WANT THE LEMON NOWWWWW!!! Ohh! Thunderstorms are so sexy!* *hentai grinn*
LATER! >:D
*update soon and give us the lemon! * |
Reviewed By: TERAGurl On: March 12, 2003 17:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it, would it be possible to update somtime today? I LOVE IT!!! |
Reviewed By: Elisabeth6789 On: March 12, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! |
Reviewed By: DeeXart3 On: March 12, 2003 17:04 CST
Comment/Review:
woweee! keep it up. i have your inspiration right here *sends love*. |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: March 12, 2003 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooohhhhhhh!!!!! Please continue, I really want to know what happens next :) |
Reviewed By: Sk8s [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wanna find out what happens? Do ya wanna, i know you do...trust me, you want to know what happens during the storm...and then after...and then after that. So p-p-p-please review...i'm itching to write the next chapter right now but i need inspiration. Oh, and please excuse me for my rookiness, obviously i'm new at this and have no clue what to do at the end of every chapter, so i'll just..."experiment" a bit, and if ya like it lemme know. Again, thanks fer reading. *feels the love* |
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