| "Come Away With Me" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see that this story wasn't forgotten. I like the currect chapter, I of course feel bad for Inuyasha and his loss. I'm curious to see what Kanna is planning. Great job. jschu25
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Reviewed By: trihn On: December 30, 2003 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
took you FOREVER to update but i am so overjoyed that you DID update that it doesn't matter. i LOVE this story. its one of my favorites.
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 18:19 CST
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Hey you've finally updated! I had to reread your story to remember what happened. But that's ok, I understand, being an author myself. Can't wait for the next chapter! See ya!
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Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 02, 2003 14:49 CDT
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Where have you been?!? I have the right to yell becuz MM.org was kind enough to put the last date you've loaded a chapter on next to the title of the chapter. oh. here's her confession. How will Sesshou respond? ah, well, he doesn't! Wonder whats going on in his mind? care to tell us in the next chappie?
and It better be up soon. |
Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 11:28 CDT
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I can see what you mean about something being wrong with the last part of the chapter, but I couldn't tell you what it was. Actually, the last part of the last section is good...when Kagome gives her reason for being afraid. Before that...I don't know if it's something in the dialogue, or what it is.
I just reread this entire fic so that I could recall all of the tiny details from the previous chapters ^^ The discussion of Kagome's feelings...and Sesshoumaru's feelings...by Inu and co. was very well done. Also, the discussion of Sesshoumaru's returned arm by Kanna and Naraku...makes me wonder what is going on in her mind.
Overall, this is a good update (which I was so glad to see *sniffles*) |
Reviewed By: Krissy On: July 14, 2003 07:31 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: blue moon On: July 07, 2003 13:44 CDT
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kris On: June 30, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!!! It's awesome. Keep at it! How many more chapters are there? Just wondering. I am curious on how Sesshomaru got his arm back...how'd that happen? What is the white spirit? Please, PLEASE answer these in the up coming chapters and PLEASE make the next chapter soon!
-keep goin!- |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 17, 2003 19:44 CDT
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CUUUUUUUTE~ Keep it up and update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 16:30 CDT
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Ahh, the plot thickens! Another great chapter (^_^)
You shouldn't worry much about comments made...the best pieces of fiction are the ones that aren't forced...you can't force characters into a situation they story isn't ready for (^___^) |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: June 13, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, Another unexpected twist. I also like that Sesshou is planning to claim her. HEHE. Let the fun begin.
Sorry. q(^.^)p I've had a hard day--make that week. Now all i want to do is slack off. TGIF. THe two parties in my school, well the first one went well, but the second one got screwed up cuz the pizza guy (whom was only across the street) came half an hour late. So, this fic is cheering me up. Thanx! |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: June 12, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So this is where you've been? i was waiting for you on fanfic. I guess I'll have to read here then. Have I reviewed before, ever? I don't know
Well, Just to let you know I've really enjoyed this fic. Period. |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: June 08, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
+___+ CLIFFIE!!! You are so cruel. What is the URL for your Sess/Kag archive? I can't seem to find it. Could you post it with your next chapter? Thanx!
PS: I really really love this story, such a good plot. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the time twist in this fic ^^ I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Kurai On: May 17, 2003 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Extremely good story!!! I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH! Please update sooooon, and why is Sesshoumaru acting so much of a jerk when they just met? I mean, he seems to care about her and everything, and will he seriously hurt Shippou? and what does he hold over shippou to make him obey?? Wahh!! I need to know the rest! |
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