| "The Darkness in the Light" Reviews/Comments [ 112 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jam ( to family) Dilan ( to friends) On: April 12, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To Hell with the clif-hangers! When is the next up date ging to be!! |
Reviewed By: Panther_Night01 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 13:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very Good Please, pretty, pretty PLEASE will you update again really really soon? So Yugi father think Yami is yugi right? that part was kinda confusing. had to read it twice before i understood it. So is Yugi's dad gonna knife 'em all, and take Yami?
Panther'sYami: what's with all they questions? Curiosity killed the cat
Panther_Night: satisfaction bought it *smug smile*
Panther'sYami: *fumes silently*
Both: Please update again *begging faces* |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME NEW CHAPPIE DREAMER!! I'm surprised you write all that with only some help from Dragon! LOL! Guess what! I finally have an idea for my next chappie! YAY!
Yana: WOW! Well.... I think I won't be the same anymore after reading that lemon with my little brother in it!
Fire: Well Yana, what I'm going to do to you in my fic. you WILL NEVER be the same!
Yeira: OH I got to read this! HEHE! Oh and thanks for geeting MY brother out of the house! Now maybe he won't give me a headache anymore!
Yana: I know something you don't know.....
Fire: SHUT UP YANA!!! Sorry about that Dreammer. She has been ranting that ALL day! She's starting to give me a major headache! DRAGON I GIVE YOU FULL PERMISSION TO SHUT HER UP!!! YOU CAN EVEN GET BAKURA TO HELP!! HEHE!
Yana: NOT FUNNY FIRE!! Just you wait! I'll get back at you!
Yeira: Keep dreaming Yana!
~Well great chappie! I loved it as usual. Yeira is doing fine now. *talking about the e-mail* But I don't think we should worry about Yeira....it's Yana who we should worry about! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Nita On: April 12, 2003 11:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why you got a nine you may ask? BECAUSE O FTHE CLIFTHANGERS!!!!!
You're Yami's are evil. Mine is kind are...Ale why are you laughing at me?
Alenned: -keeps laughing-= I an't belive you just referred to me as kind. Whne was the last time you wrote something that wasn't angst?
Uhhh, what about the sunshine, no,hey what about that, no not that i, uhhh, SHUT UP!
Alennen: -snickers- I must be one of the only male Yami's stuck with a girl as wacked out as this one.
-sticks out tougue- Baka.
We'll anyways, you guys were really good.But hurry up and write some more!!!! Your clifties are Evil. |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: April 12, 2003 05:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hope you put up the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: April 12, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, what a horrible place to end your chapter!!! *fumes indignantly* I wanna know what happens NOW! lol Man, Seto's really going to flip if Yugi's dad knifes his friends and runs off with Yami... I love this fic, and I'm already dying for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 11, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAH! What's gunna happen? O_O I hate cliffies! WE ALL DO! WAAAAH!
ooo
Philosiphies?
Here, I've got one:
"Man who pick arse have smelly finger after"
Gah!
Evil psycho father! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh why you leave us there. waaaaaa. update soon.
Ka sighs she at again. JM stop over doing it on the review.
make a face at Ka. It was another great chapter. ^_________^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: *grinning wide* Yay! I LOVE YOU! Not the kitchen counter but...
Karen: LD, stop it! oooooh, that ending is kinda scary. Not that his hikari's psychopathic father should be able to stop Yami, but then he is not at the top of his game...
LD: I think you worry too much.
Karen: Hmmm, maybe so, but I think this constitutes one of those times when it is ok to worry. This is a very precarious situation.
LD: I hope Bakura gets to knock out Yami. I mean, there is no way the Pharaoh is going to go into the Kaiba building voluntarily. Muahahaha. *Ahem* Please update again soon! We just love this story. |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 16:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it up!
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: Amiasha Ruri [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool! I usually don't like lemons, but these are very good, and the whole plot of the story is very suspensful as well. Yuugi's father think's Yami is Yuugi? Well... That's unfortunate for Yami. ^_^' Anyway, I love the storyu, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Don't keep us in suspense! |
Reviewed By: card_captor_sakura1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 08:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
poor seto. i dont kno y im saying that. anywho, PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: niff On: April 07, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woow, that was sad, poor Yugi . . . |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm glad it was longer! When is Yuugi's dad going to make his move? Are Seto and Yami going to get together? I hope you post more soon! Great job so far! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 07, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*claps* poor Yami....He needs a hug...but not from Anzu. These little bishies need our love...aww.... |
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