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| "Brief Encounter" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] | Title: brief encounter..
Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2003 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWoooooowwwwwwww,....Mooooorrreeeeee Pllllleeeeaasssseeeeee,...write the Epilogue kay,...Onnnnneeegggggaaaiiiiiii???...you can't just end it like that,...it seems a bit too sudden and leaving things between aya and yoshi hanging without some sort of a resolve or conclusion,...add in the Epilogue or write another longger continuation arc to their budding relationship,....maybe a love triangle between aya,yoshi, and toshi ne??...*wink*...all in all,...a great YxA fic,...i Loooovveeeeeee it,...it even reduced me to tears halfway reading it,...*sniffles*....yohji my fav WK character,...having you killed-off his character in this fic totaly break my heart,...*sob,sob*....but still,...yoshi is quite a cute and sexy replacement for him,....too bad aya is too stubborn to realize it,....keep-up the good work kay,...and write the Epilogue please,....*begging-on-hands-and-kenees*.....till next time,...Jaaaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaannnnbbbaaaatttttteeeeeeeee-Neee!!^.~!!
| Reviewed By: Dogmatix On: July 21, 2003 15:56 CDT
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;_; glarg..... well, very.. hm. Moving. *nod* Very moving fic. Like very much. | Reviewed By: Dinara On: July 10, 2003 20:29 CDT
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You gottas do the epilogue!! It was wonderful and heartbreaking at the same time. Sweet!!!
Thank you for such a wonderful story! | Reviewed By: silrayn silverwolf On: July 10, 2003 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. Write an epilogue. Though this is closer to being an X Japan fanfic rather than a Weiss one, I still enjoyed it and I don't know X Japan at all. It feels highly unfinished. | Reviewed By: Daea On: July 08, 2003 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I quite enjoyed the fic, and you have my vote for an epilogue. ^^ | Reviewed By: Sky Rat On: July 07, 2003 23:06 CDT
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Hey! I thought you said this was going to be funny! It was sad! It was so horribly sad! It was quite excellent...but I wasn't expecting it to make me cry.... | Reviewed By: Dani B [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Such a wonderful ending. I almost thought it was Schuldig, except that a few clues here and there made me think otherwise.
Maybe an epilogue? I'll just cast my vote in with everyone else. I'd love more just to have more in my mind how it all ended (though I already have my thoughts). No pressure from me though. If it comes, it comes and if it doesn't. Well, I'll still be perfectly happy with the story. | Reviewed By: KiT- - KaT On: July 07, 2003 02:18 CDT
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WOW! That was great. You did the characters really well too. Well anyways.... please have an epilogue PLEASE! | Reviewed By: Garner On: July 07, 2003 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yey! You updated! I'm sooo glad. Puleezz write an epilogue. Please have pity on us poor saps who need closure! | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: July 06, 2003 19:02 CDT
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Waaaahhhh an epilogue...IF WE WANT ONE O__O...are you crazy *is screaming*...SURE SURE SURE...GIMME THE EPILOGUE!!!!! Ooohh *clears her throat*...I didn't meant to get that loud^^, gomen^.^!
BUT PLEASE...give us an epilogue...it really is an open ending, I don't want it to end just like this...please!!!!!
*sigh*...I never thought to "see" Yohji again...this was a great scene at the end...between Yohji and Aya at the cemetery! So sweet and sad of course-_-...I nearly cried again! And the lemon...WOW...is going out of words^^!
Do you know what...I now have the X-Japan Ballad Collection CD. And what can I say...THE SONGS ARE INCREDIBLE..."Crucify My Love" oohhh my god...sooo sad and "The Last Song"...who is it they are mourning about, because it's also called "Memorial Track"??? Can anybody help me with that...I mean, I have a supposition, but I won't say it^.^...in case it's not right ^_^. Ahem and who is the person with the speaking passages...Yoshiki, am I right *hopefully hopefully hopefully* >_ | Reviewed By: Verdorbene Unschuld On: July 06, 2003 16:42 CDT
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No, have the epilogue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am very much enjoying this story and don't want it to end. please???? | Reviewed By: enervate On: July 06, 2003 08:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If there's an Epilogue, this isn't the end, right?
[hopeful eyes]
Marvelous ending! Very in balance as a perfect and beautiful ending for such a angsty/dramatic piece of fiction. And the ending is very touching too... I love the part when Yohji 'comes to life' [or resurrected from the grave, I reckon?] and sort-of 'lectured' Aya. That part was beautiful! [takes a tissue and wipes eyes]
Aya sounded very Aya when he just snapped at Yoshi and left... his emotional roller-coaster portrayed then was really angsty! [thumbs up] And of how you put the ending together was nice... I was wondering if the 'Yohji' was just an apparition or some ghost or some impersonation or whatever... turns out he's REALLY a spirit... [am I right?]
Omi is such an angel,... [grins]
Well, overall? 11 out of a scale of ten. Now, now,... are you continuing Coincidences? :P
Happy Graduation and will be waiting if you return to M'sia. :) As for the moment,...
GANBATTE! Congrats! Brief is one of the best things I've ever read... [and that's a compliment]
P/S : Send my regards to Yo-bun! Give him a hug from me. :) | Reviewed By: enervate On: June 05, 2003 01:18 CDT
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**whacks Mediaminer**
After several times trying, FINALLY. Ne, sempai Nadia, just get wherever to host your fics but mediaminer. My patience is worn... LOL!
Well, this chap is superb! The drum scene is damn of a nice! Somewhat seductive too... Hahahaha! Yoshi drumming with eyes closed.. Aya playing drum [gosh! That one made me grin... hehehe!] ... then,... **giggles**
As usual, you deserve all thumbs [and fingers] up! Ganbatte!
**waves pom pom** | Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: May 25, 2003 15:30 CDT
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*Phew* Incredible...this lemon. Yep, we had to wait long-_-, but now we have the new part^^ and still one more to go...GREAT!!! This sweetness still is unbelievable, I could squeeze and hug Aya all the time ^.^...soooo cute!!!!
Hey, I have exams too (in June-_-)...EXAMS SUCKS =_=!!! But...THAT'S LIFE, ne^^. *ouuuuuuhhh YEAH* -_-
Ja *GOOOOOOOO GO GO*
Koji-chan | Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. I didn't comment after the last chapter. *kicks herself* Both were very beautiful. Your story is a true romance, tugging at my heart strings. I feel so sad for Aya. It just..wonderful.. beautiful. Yoshi is a great choice.. the songs.. everything! *quits blubbering and hurries off* | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 > » ] |
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