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| "Vegeta Goes Camping!" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: LMOA!!!! On: May 24, 2003 01:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Ha-lair-E-us! Great job, I really haven't laughed that hard in awhile. I can really relate with Vegeta ( I've had REALLY, really bad experiences with camping trips, mostly involving, well, the wilderness! See, my idea of a perfect camping trip is where the insects are repelled by the glowing gas lamp, not attracted to it and burning their little insect butts off by landing on it. And let me tell you, if you've never smelled roasted insects on a warm summer night, you ain't smelled nothin'!) N e wayz, where was I? Oh yes, write more, and feel free to use my idea of roasted insects if you want to on ur other chapters...I think I would find it quite amusing how you would put THAT into words.
--Chow! | Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can actually see this happening lol this was so good keep it going. | Reviewed By: OhSoDevilish On: March 18, 2003 07:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, that was hilarious! Please write more, ou could just picture him scowling and thinking those thoughts! | Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Crackes up* hah! oh kami that was fuunny!
poor lil veggiechan he must really hate camping....well can't blame...I hate camping too! lol great fic , make more chapters in the other peoples views i want to know how they took the camping trip.^_^ | Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it, i haven't had a good laugh in a freakin while and this fic made up for it, lol. I suggest more of Vegeta's inner thoughts in the form of a diary, being as great as he is after all. | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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