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| "Promises Promises" Reviews/Comments [ 30 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: heartbroken On: April 05, 2003 21:10 CST
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I love your fanfic it is so kewl | Reviewed By: Lynn000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the thought of Kikyo dead. Infact i think i would kill her by repeatedly stabbing her with a knife(or sword), then throw her torn bloody battered body into an infinite ditch so by the time the search parties find her i'll be long gone and dead for aver 1000 years or so. oops... i swore i wouldent keep rambling on loke that about my fantasies... well continue on with your fic. Like Faen said, if u need any help killing her off... well when i update my fic (with the 3rd chap!!!) Im gonna kill kikyo (kagome's a hanyou) the bloody gory way rip her into little pieces, then bury her doggy style like a favorite bone no where near that 2 timer inuyasha who might i add....... | Reviewed By: Lynn000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the thought of Kikyo dead. Infact i think i would kill her by repeatedly stabbing her with a knife(or sword), then throw her torn bloody battered body into an infinite ditch so by the time the search parties find her i'll be long gone and dead for aver 1000 years or so. oops... i swore i wouldent keep rambling on loke that about my fantasies... well continue on with your fic. Like Faen said, if u need any help killing her off... well when i update my fic (with the 3rd chap!!!) Im gonna kill kikyo (kagome's a hanyou) the bloody gory way rip her into little pieces, then bury her doggy style like a favorite bone no where near that 2 timer inuyasha who might i add....... | Reviewed By: Lynn000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the thought of Kikyo dead. Infact i think i would kill her by repeatedly stabbing her with a knife(or sword), then throw her torn bloody battered body into an infinite ditch so by the time the search parties find her i'll be long gone and dead for aver 1000 years or so. oops... i swore i wouldent keep rambling on loke that about my fantasies... well continue on with your fic. Like Faen said, if u need any help killing her off... well when i update my fic (with the 3rd chap!!!) Im gonna kill kikyo (kagome's a hanyou) the bloody gory way rip her into little pieces, then bury her doggy style like a favorite bone no where neat that 2 timer inuyasha who might i add....... | Reviewed By: Faen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with whoever said to kill Kikyo in a bloody way. If you need any help coming up with ideas, just ask and I'll be happy to help! This is a great fic. | Reviewed By: L@u On: April 02, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that your storie is great, please make sure of killing Kikyo in a bloody way!!
she must die in pain!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I guess it would be cool if kagome killed her...you know when they try to kill Kagome, Kagome defends herself and in the process she kills Kikyo...but I guess it doesn't really matter as long as she dies right...I killed Kikyo in my story too ^_^ but I killed her in a nice way | Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 13:35 CST
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I love this fic. i have to admit that it is kinda werid for Inu to be sooooooooo NICE But other than that it is a GOOd fic keep it up | Reviewed By: Britney On: March 28, 2003 13:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv the story please fin asap. i hope inuyasha starts 2 fall in luv w/Kagome & Kik. gets very jel. Finish asap!!!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Katie On: March 28, 2003 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely enjoy reading this fic. I'm glad Kouga is in the fic. He brings comedy and amusement in the story. It brings more interest in the story, especially to see Inuyasha as a jerk. I hope to see a strong Kagome in this fic. I'm glad your brought out most of the characters from the show. | Reviewed By: Nemisis On: March 22, 2003 19:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
/blink//blink/ oookkkaaay Dragonrain has too much time... ...basically corsets suck they warped the rib cages and were worn even during preggy times... stupid PitAs....
Anyway good story, hehe having to detain Sango; see if you can also make it a mir/san fic
---KILL THE BITCH KIKYO---- she is the ultimete villian | Reviewed By: lynnie On: March 22, 2003 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! finish it soon! i want to read it! yaaaaaaa!!!!! i thinks it kawaii! | Reviewed By: NightShadow On: March 21, 2003 23:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you could have quite a good story. I just hope that you'll update soon and often. Keep up the good work. | Reviewed By: Dragonrain On: March 20, 2003 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i really like the way youve begun your story, however, i just wanted to clear up some facts about the corset... here i go-------
once you choose your corset and you've brought it home, what do you do? Well, first of all, you will need to find someone to help you get into it. The longer corsets are more complicated because they're supposed to create an hourglass effect, and for that reason can't really just be laced at the bottom like a shoe. Whichever corset you buy, what you'll find when you open the package is a firmly boned garment in two pieces (the two pieces hook up with each other in the front, creating the busk). Once you've hooked it in front, it must be laced up the back. Your lacer should start lacing from the top as if he or she is lacing a shoe. Then, when he or she comes to the point at which you want your waist to be smallest, he or she should skip an eyelet, reintroducing the laces into the eyelets immediately below the ones that have been skipped, without crossing the laces. Two corresponding loops will be created on each side, right at the waist, to be pulled later. Then the lacer should continue cross-lacing the corset like a shoe. When he or she has pulled the laces through the bottom eyelet, he or she should either tie the laces together at the bottom or knot them so that they can't go back through the eyelets. When this is done, the loops at the waist should be pulled to the desired tightness and tied. Another option to achieve the same effect is to use two laces, one starting from the top and the other starting from the bottom, meeting at the true waist. The main principle to bear in mind is that your corset has to be wider at the bust and hips and narrowest at the waist. It will be tightest at the point at which the laces are actually pulled, so you have to have the laces pulled at the middle. Throughout the lacing process the lacer should keep making sure that the corset is snug at every point. You don't want a situation in which it is very tight at some points but sticks out at others. A corset is only really comfortable and attractive if it is tight (though not torturously so) at every point. When being laced, you don't need to hold onto a bedpost or suck in your breath (unless you want to make a production out of it). Just stand up straight and put your hands on your hips to give yourself balance. Once you've laced up, you're not finished. You should put on a bathrobe, walk around, sit, cook, do whatever you want to do, for about a half an hour (minimum twenty minutes). During this time your corset will adjust to you and become more comfortable (they're amazingly adaptive). After half an hour, your lacer should readjust your laces. You will find that you can comfortably lace tighter at this second lacing. When that's over, you're done. Unless you've been foolish, or your lacer sadistic, you will be amazed at how comfortable you are. You'll find that corsets, if well-made and properly laced, are restrictive but not painful. They will enforce a very flattering posture and a terrific shape, and as long as you stay within the limits they create, you'll be comfortable and at ease. You won't be able to slouch or play touch football, but you'll be able to do virtually anything a well- dressed woman normally does.When cultural analysts marvel at how women could have done that to themselves for six hundred years, I laugh, because I have a sense that I know (that's a silly question anyway, since I have suffered more from high heels in my life than I've ever suffered from corsets). This is one of the neat things about wearing a corset. When you want to take the corset off, simply unhook the front busk. A few tips:
1) Don't eat or drink too rapidly when wearing a corset. It is easy to develop a case of hiccups if you do, and hiccups when you've got a corset on are not fun.
2) Don't sit down too rapidly. Sit down slowly and gracefully, keeping your back straight.
3) If you're engaging in strenuous physical activity, like dancing, be sure to pace yourself carefully. Your breathing capacity will be less than it normally is, though it will be sufficient for virtually anything. You don't however, want to get too out of breath. If you find this is happening, stop and rest.
4) Finally: Don't overdo it, especially not the first time. You will not feel very sexy if your ribs hurt. As I know from costuming, every woman has a different corset comfort level. Two inches below a ladies' standard waist measurement is the standard degree of tightness recommended by costumers in college and community theatre productions. This creates a fine effect. If you want to lace tighter than this, as brides often do after they've seen The Age of Innocence, only do it after you've had some experiences with corsets and know that you have what it takes to do it. You'll have to develop the breathing technique, which can only come with practice. Tight-lacing (anything tighter than two inches) is uncomfortable, but the visual effect is amazing, and many women, I think, find it somewhat exciting. Find your own pace and style.
--------------------also, to help you on the meals for the ladies wearing the corsets-------Daily waist training involves many changes in one's life. Probably one of the most important is diet. Some people supplement thier weight loss regimine with a corset. While a corset can help loose weight by limiting your intake of food at every meal, it does not mean that the wearer can eat anything they want and loose unwanted pounds. Besides, wearing a corset on the sole notion of loosing weight is not the best way to go about waist training. As we stated above, you must enjoy wearing a corset to make progress with waist training. You may notice that many of these diet tips for the tightlacer mirror proper dietary ideas that are used in Wearing a corset does not mean starving yourself or giving up food. True, you cannot eat as much when you are laced into a corset. In most western countries, we tend to eat 2-3 large meals a day. This is just not possible for the tightlacer. It is easier on the body to eat 4-5 smaller meals. It allows the digestive tract to keep a constant flow of material running through. If you were to eat 2 large meals a day, your body would have a large bulky mass to pass through at intervals. This usually results in painful cramps and sometimes heartburn.
When eating your meal, try to avoid cold beverages. The reason for this is that the cold liquid will numb the nerves in your stomach. With the nerves numb, your stomach cannot tell you when you are full. Instead, try to drink 15 to 30 minuets before eating.
Drink at least 8 glasses of water everyday. This does not have to be straight water, but beverages that include water.
Avoid carbonated beverages. This includes soda, beer, and Champagne. Carbonated beverages may not be a problem for you when you first start to reduce your waist. As you reduce your waist, there is less room for the carbonated bubble to distribte. This results in pockets of gas in your stomach or intestine. What happens then is either a long stretch of belching, or painful cramps.
Avoid foods that cause heartburn or gas. These foods include, but are not limited to; beans, onions, and cucumbers.
Some foods expand in your stomach when introduced to water. Rice, potatos, and pastas.
Foods such as red meat, take quite a while for your body to digest. This results in a tired, run down fealing. The dedicated tightlacer limits their intake of red meat. Instead eat light foods such as salads, vegetables, breads, fish, and poultry.
how to exactly put on a corset step by step---------- STEP #1
First loosen the lacing at the back until there is a gap of about 4-6 inches. Put the corset around you (preferably not next to bare skin but over a camisole, slip, or chemise).
STEP #2
Once the corset is in place, fasten the front busk; do the top clasp first and the rest should follow.
STEP #3
Reaching around back, pull the loops gently then tighten the lacing progressively towards the middle from both top and bottom until you are happy with the fit. There should be a pleasant 'hugging' sensation, but you should still be comfortable.
STEP #4
To finish, tie the ends in a bow at back or front.
Tip: One should not try to lace the corset closed, or even very tightly on the first several wearings, due to the fact that new corsets need "breaking in time". After a short period of time, they mold to your body shape and the material takes the strain of waist reduction evenly. Placing too much pressure on the corset at the outset may damage the fabric and stitching. Additionally, it may cause you discomfort and a negative feeling toward your beautiful new garment.
Tip: if you are going to wear stockings and shoes with your corset, it is a good idea to put them on before tightening the laces, as most people are not used to the straight back a corset gives, making it hard to bend down.
corsets should be comfortable--------
A well-made corset fits comfortably at the ribs and hips and gently compresses only your waist, allowing for easy breathing. While maintaining their exquisite quality and durability, today's authentic styles manage to be very comfortable. To ensure total comfort, do not lace too tightly during the first several wearings. Allow your beautiful new garment the time to mold naturally so it hugs the curves of your body. You will find the sensation of being gently held straight with the back supported almost relaxing. A properly fitting corset will not be painful to wear.
Comfort Tip: Always lace down just less than you feel you can tolerate or prefer, so that you will continue to look forward to wearing your corset. Take special care of the skin under the corset. It is recommended that you powder the skin all around your torso before you put on your corset. If you plan to wear your corset frequently, you may want to consider wearing a camisole, bodystocking, chemise, or leotard to help prevent chafing when the corset is laced. You may also use a tube top pulled down around the waist, so that nothing shows over or under the corset.
do some research next time.if you couldnt tell, im a fan of the corset and the benifits and love to wear them. maybe you should rewrite that portion of the story.
you can find all this information easily over the internet,at these sites and more, http://www.desertvista.com/sweets/corset.html and http://www.absolutecorsets.com/help-desk/corset-faq.htm#put-on | Reviewed By: Rei On: March 20, 2003 10:49 CST
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Waaah! Where's the rest of the fic!? Please update soon! (and is Rin still only about 6 years old?) | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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