| "No Regrets" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 12:07 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! That was so incredibly hot and very touching. I liked the very realistic feel of it all with all the conflicting emotions at the end. I guess bittersweet is the word I'm looking for. God, I hate Chi Chi! What a bitch! Anyway, great job! |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin On: March 21, 2003 11:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is it about your dialogue? you keep kicking it up a notch! I don't know what is sexier, Goku's, er, technique, or what he says when he does it.
Wow! I needed a fan wheni read it today, and you knwo i have read it so so so so many times already!
Cos it's GREAT!
When you write a Go/B, it's magic.
Thank you for the good time! ;p LOL |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 11:44 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well ... I don't know how to begin...
It is SUPERB ! I liked it sooooooo much that there is no word to describ it. You made Goku just like I see he is. He's not the happy hero, he has problems, and you made a cool fic with his passion and love for Bulma. I guess by Bardockgurl's review that I am not the only one jealous of her situation ^.^ It totally rocks and you got to make a sequel. Your writing is wonderful, and you have great talent. I always thought that Goku had a thing for Bulma ;)
You got it girl, and continu like that!!! I BEG you! You GOT to make a SEQUEL !!! :)
Silver_Sorceress a.k.a Lullaby |
Reviewed By: -Onimusha- On: March 21, 2003 11:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...OMG....OMG...gokusgirl...Of all the DBZ fics I have been reading lately have been great. The lemon detailing in them is very good....but yours...OMG...your lemon detailing was just as awsome as all the others....but it was the powerfull emotions that you put into your fic that had me in tears for Goku. Its unbeleiveable. Its too bad you want this to remain as a on-shot. I think you should maybe reconsider.....PRETTY PLZ...on making another chapter!!
Anywho, I, Onimusha, I'm proud to say that your fic is number 2 in my book. Number one being 'Slave' of cource. Check it out. ^_^ If you do decide to make another PLZ tell me ok
singasong47@earthlink.net
-Onimusha- |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 11:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh!! That was wonderful!! I love Goku/Bulma fics, dang, I'm jealous of her... she gets all the hot guys!! Very hot lemon GGirl!! Definitely a 10 plus story...:D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 18:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All hail the hentai qeen Gokusgirl!
That is quite possible the hottest thing I ever read! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 20:36 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, I hate to admit this, but I've never had sex as good as you just wrote, ggirl! 8-( I can't believe I'm jealous of an anime character - I've got to get me some of that! ;-)
It was difficult to read this in one sitting... I had to get up and turn on the A/C, if you know what I mean.
Woman, you have an amazing talent. I just wish Goku would grow a pair and stand up to that cabbage he's married to. Hmmm. Let's see how she handles a Kamehameha Wave at close range, shall we? ;-)
Outstanding fic, ggirl! As I said before - you need to find a few contests and enter this into them. It's a sure-fire winner! |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 15:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To get right to the point... THAT SHIT WAS TIGHT!!!
But then again, that's what I can expect 4rm my fave fanfic author!!! |
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