| "Yugioh: Cruise Lines" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Title: I'll be reviewin' a lot
Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: May 03, 2004 19:40 CDT
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It's me! Also your welcome. I'll try to be on the internet almost every day, though I can't be on fridays, and saturdays. Yep, school's been a total killer! Can't wait to get out of school for the year. Hope you'll be able to get the next chapter soon! Oh and remember PLEASE LET IT BE YAMI AND TEA! Yami: okay lil Princess! let me see that review! MP: I don't think so, Yami. *gets rope and chair and ties Yami into the chair* MP:Sorry cutie! Well until next time Salior Star Universe! Yami: PRINCESS SERENITY *voice rising on every word* UNTIE ME AND GET ME OUTTA HERE! MP: heh heh ^______^; Gotta go or he's gonna blow! Yami in the background:
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 16:19 CDT
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hah well thanks for reveiwing you 3. I'm trying my best to finish this next chapter because i accidently deleted it so i'm having to try and remember it all. Besides i have school and every thing, but don't worry i only have 2 1/2 weeks left of school and then i'll be able to update faster. I keep on forgetting to update my profile but just check to see when was the last timme i logged on and see if i made any changes on the profile. Please continue to R&R!
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Reviewed By: lil girl On: April 29, 2004 18:55 CDT
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hey I'm a first time reader and I like Yu-gi-oh enough to read this fanfic. I'd like to see Yami and Tea together. Also Serenity and Seto together. Mai and Joey are a good pair too. Like the fanfic so far keep up the work!
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Reviewed By: pretty Girl On: April 28, 2004 20:29 CDT
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Yami and Tea! Yami and Tea!. . . Please? * gives the puppy face look*
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: April 28, 2004 20:19 CDT
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Hey it's me Moon Princess! I'd love to see Tea and Yami (I'm keeping all my faith on Tea and Yami)(Sound Familiar?) Joey and Mai Seto and Serenity Hmmmmm. . . Well that's it I guess. Yami: Hey Moon Princess! whatcha up to? *leans over shoulder taking a peek at the review* MP:Hey!!! No lookin' lover boy!! (Blushes like heck!!) I like him too. (the reason why I chose Yami and Tea because that I'm kinda like her and I'm not in the story) Yami: Awwww come on PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!! MP:*takes out moon sword and holds the tip at his chest* try it and see what happens!!! Yami:*backs off* I'll leave Princess!^_^; *runs off like heck!* MP: well that was nice. That's my review!
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Reviewed By: -Lil Sorceress- On: April 06, 2004 17:43 CDT
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Funny. But I....hate.....Tea....How dare....she...win...a....cruise.... ::gets taken away by the nice white people to the nice white building with padded walls:: NO!! I'M NOT INSANE!!! LET ME OUT!!!
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Reviewed By: 43tt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 22:52 CST
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lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i kept laughing especiall during the echo and 'Jessie' parts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should do more like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you inspired me to write comedy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm 43tt
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Reviewed By: 43tt [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2004 22:52 CST
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lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this was so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i kept laughing especiall during the echo and 'Jessie' parts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!! you should do more like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you inspired me to write comedy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm 43tt
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Reviewed By: Helen On: September 21, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic hope you write more. I think I like the pairing Tea&Yami hope thats what you pick for the pairings.
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Reviewed By: Helen On: September 21, 2003 17:18 CDT
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 21:19 CDT
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The reason y i haven't been updating is cuz i've been very busy with all these camps but now i'm back and i'm working on the next chappie...so i sry and i'll make it up to ya. |
Reviewed By: Dustbunny On: July 31, 2003 15:33 CDT
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Dustbunny: Y RN'T U ^DATING!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Bunnydust: What she said! |
Reviewed By: yami's_luv_child On: June 19, 2003 17:31 CDT
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hehe... sorry about that*points at prior 4 review*
my computer was acting funny |
Reviewed By: yami's_luv_child On: June 19, 2003 17:27 CDT
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so far so so so good(a little odd though)
as for coupling, i like tea & bakura that |
Reviewed By: yami's_luv_child On: June 19, 2003 17:26 CDT
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so far so so so good(a little odd though)
as for coupling, i like tea & bakurathat |
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