| "Sweeper Three" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: a fan On: May 07, 2004 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the stroy. It has a unique atmosphere. Didn't you ever contemplate on continuing this fic into a threesome (but without the competition-of-two-for-the-third-person's-attention part)? What i missed so far was the presence of Q and Tro, but i understand that they do not fit into the storyline yet. (ok, so if you read this far, you know why i didn't rate the spelling...) Could you please continue?
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Reviewed By: Isha Falas On: July 25, 2003 13:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Cat, Man this fic is great! I've never really thought about how life must've been between the war and Endless Waltz. You never really think about how there were just 15 at the time. This is a great fic and I know you're busy with Fragments(which I also adore) could you keep going with this one? Please? |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 09:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found the idea very fresh and intriguing. It's not often that the ages of the pilots are taken into consideration.
The awkward friendship between them really was born under very harsh, unusual circumstances, and seeing them in a civilian light has much promise.
I thought your inclusion of the resentment on the part of the Sweepers who bailed was also very realistic.
Your characterizations are wonderful, and I'm glad you are waiting to introduce any pairings. They are struggling enough with their current situations and although they may find themselves oddly drawn to one or another at times, the build up is really what makes it seem solid and meaningful. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updateing!!!! WOW this chapter was great I just love this story... Please keep going and update soon |
Reviewed By: allonym On: May 28, 2003 05:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Honestly, of all your fics this is the one that has drawn me in the fastest...and it's been so long since an update! Please don't forget this one, I really like what you're doing with it. |
Reviewed By: Asitha On: April 28, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked most of the other work, but I was slightly hesitant about reading this one (though
why, I do not know), but I finally decided to read it when I had nothing else to do and
now I'm very glad. It has a good beginning, please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Yira On: April 20, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was very enjoyable. ^_^ Your others are as well. You are a superb writer and I respect your abilities greatly. How you are managing to write three continuing stories at the same time is beyond me, but I will tell you that I shall read them -even if I do not review ^o^;;;;
Also, please note that I do not usually speak like this, a friend of mine is having a great influence on me at the moment. ^-^;;;; Hehehe. Ja ne Calic0cat. |
Reviewed By: Spite [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story. The way it's so realistic is very fascinating. It's very plausible that the governments plans be exactly what would happen to the underage pilots despite the good they did and not an option I have seen depicted anywhere else before.
I also like your writing style a great deal. I look forward to read more of your work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
*glomps the author*
Wonderful! Now we must find out what they choose. And when they're going to be able to hear from the other pilots again. Also a little worried about how they're going to deal with Relena when the time comes..because we all know it will.
I love the characterization of Howard. He's the ultimate friend/father. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Howard really seems like a caring guardian.
He certainly takes the G-boys' fellings into consideration.
I hope the Sweepers don't bother them too much.
Update soon! Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
Reviewed By: claire On: March 30, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Forgive my laziness in giving feedback, I know I'm a selfish and bad fanfic reader. But even I have limits. When I've read and thoroughly enjoyed every single one of your fics, I can't help but feeling guilty, so here I am. Please consider it a grand feedback for all your gw fanfics.
I absolutely adore your characterization of Duo Heero and Wefei, they are wonderful and realistic. And human. You give them blood and flesh.
I love every sweet moments you so lovingly describe with simple but powerful words, not imposing your own pov like so many authors in this fandom often do.
And the stories! Where did you get all this great plots! I'm beyond speech!
I'm not sure if it's just me or not, but my preference for fanfics vary a lot based on my moods. One day I'd like it rough and dark, the other day I'd read only the sappy ones, and so on. So I routinely skip a lot of good fics just because I'm not in the mood for them when they come up. But I found myself eagerly anticipating every single one of your new stories and never passed up a single part yet.
Thank you! And keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
More! Get them back their weapons! Keep them away from her pinkness. And for the love of all that is evil...write the next chapter of Winning Duo! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very original idea for a continuation. Keeping Heero, Duo, and WuFei together under Howard as guardian. Can't believe the government took Heero's gun and WuFei's sword! Can't wait for rest!! |
Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 22:49 CST
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The idea behind this new arc is wonderful, really creative. I can't wait to read what happens next - I'm so glad Heero and Wufei were taken in by Howard. Howard, by the way, is really cool in this story ^_^ |
Reviewed By: morgaine_darkwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how you manage to have two wonderful stories going and to start a third that promise to be as good.
I really like the way you hint at so many possibilities in just one short chapter. |
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