| "Mine to Take" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jen928 On: August 09, 2005 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That fic was... amazingly great. Who knows what would have happened, had I been here by myself. I only wish I was. Your fic has it's own special folder in my favorites. I've actually read this twice, once last night too. Cuz it's just that good! I think I'm going to go take... a nice cold shower...
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 22:46 EDT
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Holy hell... Hotness on a plate... That was genius. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 22:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW... *Blush* *S*
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Reviewed By: pourkay On: June 04, 2005 10:59 EDT
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Why are all of your stories so sexist?
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Title: reread
Reviewed By: Ithilwen NLI On: May 04, 2005 21:24 EDT
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The fact that it's taken so long before anyone noticed this should count for something. There are places in the middle there where it seems that Inuyasha has three hands.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:47 EDT
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yeah, okay, so ignore the last review... I don't know what happened but I clicked review on this other story I read right after yours and it went to review yours instead... humm.. well anyway, I did add your story to my favorites as well...
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 00:45 EDT
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i added it to my favorites. i liked it, especially the ending with Shippo and his little 'illusion'. cute... :0)
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 15, 2005 22:50 EDT
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ohy me! that was hot! I don't give a shit if it was OOC or not. It had me dripping wet... a cold shower won't cure this one either...
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: HPangel589 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do u manage to keep your audiaunce so captivative? I've read 4 of your works so far and absolutely love them. You write with conviction and such a play on words that makes the scenes just come alive. Please always keep writing~
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Title: Whew!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion - not signed in On: January 26, 2005 16:13 EST
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That was a unique first time! InuYasha was a little more bold thatn usual, but love (and lust) can make you do crazy things. LOL --- Nicely done!
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Title: Mine To Take
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 20:10 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Mari-chan the kitty On: December 09, 2004 17:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so totally awsome! And so totally out there, I wish I could find more like it! The idea of him sneaking up on her and taking her in her sleep... That he takes her before she knows what's happening... I agree with kin178, I got really wet! All I can say to Ookami-chan is: PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS! *pleading* To other writers: YOU WRITE STORIES LIKE THIS TOO, PLEASE!? *bats eyelashes* The first time I read this I was at school, wasting time between classes outside the lecture hall. I swear my face was lit up in a bright blush, and I had to cover my face with my hand to hide the huge grin. It was hard trying to disguise from those around me exactly WHAT I was reading... Thank God I only had one more class after it. I was so turned on reading it, I had to go home and change my panties! ^_~v (p.s. I've since decided not to read any fics labelled R or NC-17 at school. And yeah yeah, I know I should be doing schoolwork... -_-')
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Reviewed By: Amoraluv [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 22:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D@mn u write some hot stories!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, i just had to read it again, such a great story! Again your one shot is in ym top five, you should write mroe of them! Great job with it. Hope to see more writing soon.
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Reviewed By: natascha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write wonderful lemons. And I definitely love the way your write Inuyasha. He may be collared, but he's definitely NOT leashed. ^_~
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