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| "Harem Candidate" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Reviewed By: Chibi Enu ^_^ On: February 21, 2004 00:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic! ^_^ It's rocks!! ^^ Please update soon? PLEASE? ^______________^ oh, yeah,you rock, so, ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!!! ^_____________^
| Reviewed By: LuLu-chan On: January 20, 2004 13:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. I rally like it. Update soon. Love ya^^
| Reviewed By: Lin-chan On: September 14, 2003 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! | Reviewed By: Visions of Malice On: September 07, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... it's quite good, except some spelling mistakes. Hiead's last name is Gner not Grier and the name is Roose not Ruse. But except that, everything seems fine to me.
Your style of writing is very good and the story is very interesting. I never thought Azuma would molest Hiead, but.. oh well. It's yummy anyway. I enjoyed reading the lemon, it could really give ya nosebleed.
Please write more, I'm very curious about the rest of your story.
*huggles*
Vision | Reviewed By: Elaisa On: September 07, 2003 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, cool fic. Keep on writing, it's really good.
And that lemon... my gosh. great, fantastic, awesome.
Keep on going girl, you rock! | Reviewed By: Mika-chan On: August 21, 2003 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy^^ Personally I can't wait for more ^.~
Ne, what's gonna happen? I'm so curious. What if Azuma finds out?! @.@ He would kill them... uhm... nope, I think he would kill Zero but not Hiead. Gah, I'm so excited.
I'm begging you, hurry. Update soon! | Reviewed By: Hiead On: August 19, 2003 22:51 CDT
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Please continue it, i want to read more of this fic. | Reviewed By: Angi On: August 20, 2003 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's a really cool idea. I would have never thought of a story like that. Please write more.
oh, and one more thing. The name is Gner not Grier. | Reviewed By: Mi-chan On: July 17, 2003 15:13 CDT
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Woah! I didn't expect that! 'Poor' Hiead-chan *giggles evilly*; what'll Azuma do to him next? Poor, poor Hi-chan >:)
Is Zero going to find out? What'll he do? C'mon, update! You hafta, please. | Reviewed By: Lewwie On: July 16, 2003 11:50 CDT
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That's awesome. Please update, I wanna know what happens to Hiead next (though I can guess...) | Reviewed By: abyssinian74 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
B-E-A-utiful!!! really, haha, i love to see hiead helpless, (gosh, i'm so sadistic...) write, go on, and yep this is not a request, it's an order. | Reviewed By: Pinkydbzfan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohh yummie XD. i hope that you contunie this series. very intresting and creative plot. How can you not love the idea of a boy Harem. *sigh i wish i had one of my own.oh well. Keep up the writing, i cant wait to see what happens next | Reviewed By: Sakaji On: May 12, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interestng idea and great story! Keep it up. :3 | Reviewed By: Dryad Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 18:09 CST
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Interesting, yes, yes. CREEPY, too @.@ why do people always think that Instructor is a child molester!? LMAO, it makes for an intriguing story, yes, so I have no objection ^.^ And this Aslan character...I want to know more about him. ^.^ He kinda reminds me of Hiead, with the silver hair.
Only a few points: Asuma is spelled Azuma and Ruse is Roose. Otherwise, spelling looked ok. Some of your sentences were run-on and broke the flow of the story a little, but nothing some beta-ing couldn't fix. ^.^ Ahh, need a beta-person? I'd be glad to help. IM me at DryadChick114 if ya want any revision help -- I always get people to revise my stuff now, 'cause my writing always sucks on first round -.-;;; Anywho, good story, write more! |
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