| "Midnight Rain" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: wilyfox34
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done. This is a beautiful piece. I can't wait for the lemon. Update!!! This piece is so worth it. Great fic. I Loved it!
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Reviewed By: Floretta On: May 15, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! I'm glad you posted this considering how few good FuumaxKamui fics out there. We need more like this. It was soooo good. Hope you get around to completing it.
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Reviewed By: Ranmagirl7 On: October 29, 2003 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute! Your comletly right they don't have enough kamui/fuma pairings out there. all there are is Subaru and Seishiro pairings, though I LOVE those pairing's and have nothing against them I just wish that there was more Kamui/fuma. Anyhoo LOVED your fic, it's really good and please don't make it a one shot. it's good and i'm dying to know what happens next, will you continue it till fuma becomes 'kamui'? I wonder what'll happen.... Anyhoo loved it and hope you continue it, can't wait till you do, if you do.
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Reviewed By: Kamui's Gimini On: June 16, 2003 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic I love it. It's the best i've read so far. please continue it as soon as posible cuz i'd like to read more of it. and keep up the Hentai work. Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Tortie-chu On: June 09, 2003 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was nice, very nice. You know, as much of CLAMP's work as I've seen and own, I've never seen them draw a kiss. It's no good that way, really a shame. That's why I was disappointed when Fuuma stopped kissing Kamui in this fic. To me, the kissing was the best part, there was no need for oral sex. Sex can smack all the romance out of a scene, sort of make it less interesting. However, YOU'RE the one writing this, so please continue as you see fit. I know you'll do well. |
Reviewed By: emi On: April 28, 2003 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
o man! that was wow. fuuma and kamui, so nan deska? well keep it up there are not enough of these stories. In the rain too? very creative...romantic and sensual. hey if u do a bed scene... just hopefully if kamui doesnt bac down...use candles! and wax...lol O satin sheets are nice too! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this so far. There are not enough FuumaxKamui stories out there. Looking forward to more. |
Reviewed By: Lan_Minx On: April 09, 2003 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must say, excellent fanfic. I was really enjoying this subtle and suggestive lemon scene between Kamui and Fuuma, my fav character from "X".Nothing more to add, I'm simply enchanted with this. |
Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, where to start?! *rubs hands* Firstly, you did a outstanding job so far. Secondly, love-making in the rain?! So romantic!!! Thirdly: FUUMA! YES!!! And it's Good Fuuma too. *grins* Now, when you have spar time, can you pretty please make the next chapter?
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: silver_elven_fox On: March 30, 2003 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this was splendid! *giggles* Please write more soon! I'll be waiting! |
Reviewed By: Kamui No Miko On: March 24, 2003 04:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only I knew where Fuuma learnt to do that...lolz..
Great Fanfic..I can hardly wait for the next installment. :) |
