| "Ranma, the Demon Sorcerer" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: kke On: June 12, 2004 09:48 CDT
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Oh, come on! Where is the next chapter? I can wait (I hope).
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Reviewed By: kke On: May 26, 2004 17:46 CDT
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I just stoped by to see if there was a new chapter up yet. Good story.
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Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 13:45 CST
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I wouldn't use it as a straight crossover, but more of a twisted cameo. Spoiler.... Like Daolon using a pikachu figure to created a twisted, yet powerful Pikachu Youma. Or a BEW Dragon with a REB Dragon's head glue beside it turning into a twisted two headed Dragon.
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Reviewed By: RagnaBlade On: March 24, 2004 08:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO NOT INCLUDE POKEMON OR DIGIMON IN THIS STORY! That would just ruin it. Yu-gi-oh might actually do well considering the ancient Eygptian magic. Other then that an overall enjoyable story. -RagnaBlade
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Reviewed By: gopu On: February 21, 2004 06:31 CST
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great chapter.
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Reviewed By: White Fox 612 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool fic! PLZ keep up the good.
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Reviewed By: HVulpes [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks, am doing it. For those Akane fans... Akane doesn't like Ranma in this fic. She thnking of him as a threat and a danger to her familiy. So does Nabiki. It's just that they look at it differently. It's not Akane bashing, just a negative Akane. She might come around. So might Nabiki. But they won't have any romantic feelings for Ranma. This is a harem fic, so many women will be with Ranma. But only on of the Tendos will be matched up to Ranma. And to give the secret away, it will be Kasumi. After the action, I might go into more detail of the different characters feelings. I hope that you can hold on till then. I hope that might make you happy.
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Reviewed By: Little John of Locksland On: December 10, 2003 07:26 CST
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Err you accidently misposted the latest chapter of Succubus' Kiss onto Demon Sorcerer. You may wish to redo that chapter add-on with a proper DS chapter instead and move that incorrectly loaded SK chapter to its rightful spot.
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Reviewed By: Jay Man On: December 09, 2003 17:25 CST
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Just a note the last review was after I read the first chapter, but so far the others seem to be more of the same. You are definately skilled at writing fanfiction, but you have a habit of treating some characters unfairly. Just don't forget to back up your relationships with proof of some sort, and try to be fair about your characterization and this fic will be great. Good luck on the reast of the story, and good work on whats already down.
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Reviewed By: Jay Man On: December 09, 2003 17:12 CST
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Well so far you seem to be an author who is not a fan of Akane. You have her out of character, she didn't think of Ranma as a pervert until after they saw each other naked, and she wasn't upset about Ranma beating her until after she knew he was a boy. From the start this seems like an interesting concept that you have here but you should try to do it without bashing. Akane is much nicer in general than you make her seem and she probably would have made friends with Shampoo at least. Everyone else seems to be preperly described though you are definately toning down Ganma's role in the story. This story has potential, a lot of potential, just try to be fair.
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Reviewed By: HV On: November 23, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Commenting on the Sky Demon/Jade Romance. I can't see it. Jade has been betrayed by him and so might not be feeling to much passion for him. Plus Sky Demon (Forget the name, have to look it up.) loves power more than anything. Or at least being free. But i could see where attraction was part of Jade at the time. But I still don't feel much of a match up, unless Jade become evil and there would be little passion between the two of them.. Now hatred between the two might work better, or a grudge. I could see that. But there might be more fun in Jade future. She hasn't met the Sailor Senshi yet.
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: November 23, 2003 07:14 CST
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Cool,fic. Now the evil chi wizard is sending evil tiger creature to do his dirty work. Do ont underestimate Jade,she may not be a great fighter but her cunning makes up for her lack of fighting skill and the abilty to show up where trouble is going to brew. When will the J-Team is going to make an apperance in this fic? Will there going to be air demon and Jade romance?
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Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 18:47 CDT
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chapters 4 and 5 need the spaceing fixed
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: October 10, 2003 07:01 CDT
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So the moon demon has his own plans and why don't he use Valmont and the Dark Hand to do his job in the mortal world? Finally the next chapter is done! Shendo is going to figure out what the moon demon knows. I would like to see romance between the Hsu wu9air demon) and Jade.
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Reviewed By: Peter Kim On: March 28, 2003 21:24 CST
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So the Chans are going to meet the Sailor Senchies
very soon. Dai should get Moouse to attack Ranma just to see how powerful,etc Ranma and Shampoo
is and then boost Moouse's powers,etc then set him againest Ranma and Shampoo and try to drain their powers. When will the real Demon Socerers that is traped is going to make an apperance in this fic? Remember that Shendo have his body back and some of the Tailsmens after he and his brothers and sisters are sent back to their prison plane after the world changing book indesntant. |
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