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 Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2003 17:02 CDT
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Awww...Marik's going sweet on us...how cute! That was one hot lemon! MM-MM!!
 Reviewed By: Tiamat  On: April 16, 2003 00:03 CDT
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That is soooo sweetttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!! hehe I cant wait to see Maliks reaction when he finds out that not only will he have a mini Marik running around he is also going to have a Mini Bakura running around hehe. The horror oh the horror! (joking joking ........or am I?)
 Reviewed By: Yui  On: April 15, 2003 22:07 CDT
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Yui: So what's his job?!?!?! YOU DIDN'T SAY! ARGH!!!! *runs off to go bash simething* Must... know... *passes out*

Shimiru (yami yui): Get over it.

Yui: *pouts* Why don't you go get a job yami? I'm working my ass off doing high school AND my part time job at R-Galaxy! (our resident anime/manga store)

Shimiru: Not my fault.

Yui: Is too! You're the one who eats all the ice cream and pizza! Where else could it possibly go? I bought a whole pizza last night, and it was gone by morning. I only ate two slices!

Shimiru: Maybe it was your room mate

Yui: I don't have a F***ing roomate! Although... maybe if I got one she could take your room, you can sleep in the soul room... We could save so much money if she spilt rent with us!

Shimiru: Nuh uh, I am not giving up my room.

Yui: Fine. THen get a job.

Shimiru: now look what you've done Bakurasgirl! Ra damn it....

Yui: =P Great write. Keep up the great work!

Until next chapter
~Yui
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2003 20:00 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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LEMON!CAN'T WAIT 'TIL LEMON!Isis has to go through so much.I'll give them a few hundreds,just to help.Today's my birthday annd I'm finally a teenager.Write more!LEMON!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas  On: April 15, 2003 19:22 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I love this fic and I can't wait for you to update again. This story is funny and dramatic you incorporate everything so well. Keep up the good work! I want to give the babies matching black hooded capes with gold chains and the eye of Horus on top like Malik has. I think they both would look adorable in them.
 Reviewed By: hotaruchan27  On: April 15, 2003 18:17 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yeah, they did so Stress Remedy can't be updated for a while. ~_~ But Kiwi reposted Bakura's Wall under her account so it's back up for now. ^_^

Tigerlily: *starts setting up for tomorrow's lemon* ^____^ Malik and Marik, together at last! That's going to be one happy little yami.

Absence makes the heart grow fonder... or Marik's case a lot more horny. ^_^ Loved the reaction from Isis but what I don't understand is how Malik got thrown in as a possible father? I can't wait until the kids start calling her Auntie Isis. Kawaii! ^_^

Tigerlily: Ya know, when Malik mentioned the possibilities with a little Marik running around I suddenly thought of an episode of Slayers. They were looking into Kopii magic and as part of an experiment about a 100 little Lina's & Gourry's were made and started fighting out. It was really cute. I wonder if Bakura's & Marik's kids are going to act like that?

^_^;; Probably not. The hikari soul will probably be passive and or gentle like Ryou. But sibling rivalry is a definite possibility, I think. Ya know, my friend who had the twins (they're 3 now)? The girl, Bianca is really manipulative and will throw things and hit her brother, Vincent (he usually laughs and thinks it's funny). But when she gets caught she puts her hand to mouth and gasps, wide eyed. It's very cute though even though it's bad. And if they yell at her for it she puts on the sad face and tears until they feel sorry or bad and then she's fine, she does crocodile tears very well. I really do wonder what they're personalities are going to be like... Ha! I can see them fighting over toys now! ^_^ Did they keep any of the baby clothes from Nanny Bakura? Having it should help a little bit.
 Reviewed By: NegaCat  On: April 15, 2003 18:04 CDT
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Two Mariks are a little scary... I pity Malik. Poor guy, two Mariks *whistles* that's a LOT of aspirin! Anyway, I liked Malik's reaction to what Marik said about the table. It was really funny! I have one question. Will the babies get their origonal souls back? I'd hate to see those poor things with Cinetti as their soul their whole life!!! I g2g now, keep writing these master pieces! They're gooooooood ^-^
 Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2003 17:49 CDT
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Goldaries: *insane laughter* Yeah, I can imagine Marik teaching the furby things to say...Provided he doesn`t go crazy from the wind up monkey.
Marik: Damn you. Evil little...
Goldaries: What was that, Marik?
Marik: Nothing.
Ryou: Stop it, you two.
goldaries: Who`s gonna make me?
Bakura: Goldaries, SHUT IT NOW!
Goldaries: I`ll be good.
 Reviewed By: Angel Black  On: April 15, 2003 17:41 CDT
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More more more more MORE! I can wait much longer for the baby!
 Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2003 17:29 CDT
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OMG! Marik's going thru the pregnancy munchies! HAHAHAHA!!! My hubby did the same thing! LOLOLOL!!! This is going to be a riot!!
 Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awww Only ONE? Humm hummm.....I think I'll give Ryou a FULLY STOCKED Diaper bag!( I gave my friend the same gift because she was required to have a baggage limit. But it had alot things she would need for her baby in it)
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 15, 2003 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwwww, I'm glad that he was't mad! I wanna give Ryou a blue bear for his shower.
 Reviewed By: Tiamat  On: April 15, 2003 03:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved the newest chapter hehe I knew Malik would make a great daddy, he doesnt care who made the children he will love them both the same :) For a gift I would like to give one of the babies a mini toy Rod that looks like the millinum rod! That way in the future when the children are older when Marik makes a joke about the rod the kid that owns the toy rod can go "Daddy what does that mean?" Hehe or "Daddy is it okay to stroke my rod to?" Ahh the trouble that Marik will get into when the other 2 daddys and the mommy hear the kids saying that. Though I think Bakura would be highly amused if a kid asked Marik that :P
 Reviewed By: Kitty-Chan  On: April 14, 2003 22:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to give them an Anzu plushie! MAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Ryou would think it was some sort of sick joke and burst out in tears! HAHAHAHAHAHA! But if you tear off her head... chocolates of all shapes and sizes and other good sweets come out! You could either give Ryou the plushie and make her tear off the head in anger, or make the (evil, wicked, vile...) plushie a piñataish thingy. Each person could have a turn wacking her with all of their frustration and see who gets the candy! It's a win-win situation! You don't have to do EXACTLY like that, just with the same idea. If you don't like it, (it might traumatize Ryou for life...), just tell me. I feel angry at something (i forgot exactly what...) and I hit my pillow lots and lots of times and the image of Anzu just popped up and this is the result...

Good work as always and keep up the GREAT, WONDERFUL, FABULOUS work!

^_____^ I feel soooo giddy right now... Mm..... coffee ice cream.... So good and creamy...


~Kitty-chan
 Reviewed By: Yui  On: April 14, 2003 21:23 CDT
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I can't wait to see what Marik's job is! I hope it annoys the hell out of him. Geeze I'm sadistic. Oh well. It's funny! Oh, I'd like to give them the other basonet. (is that how you spell it?) And here' some chocolate just for you. *gives chocolate and basonet to bakurasgirl* Enjoy!

Until the next chapter
~Yui
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