| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 10:44 CST
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in the next chapter is Ryou going to turn into a girl?
can't wait!YAH!
:)gralnak |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 09:02 CST
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Karen: *pouts* I just can't stop saying it. Poor Ryou. He has to go though so much. And those stupid people brought back all the old memeories.
LD: Hmm, *eyes pop open* Is Ryou going to have to testify as a woman? Oh, that would be twisted. I wonder what Steven would think...
Karen: That isn't funny.
LD: No, it is ironic. Steven kept saying he didn't want a daughter. Now he is going to get one! Muahahaha!
Karen: O.o Oh, shut up. You don't even know that that is goin to happen.
LD: Well, we'll find out soon enough! |
Reviewed By: Caro On: April 05, 2003 08:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so sorry i haven't reviewed in so long!!!!!!!!!!! i was banded from the internet, i still am, i'm just at liz's house. so naturaly the first thing i do is cheack your story. will i must finish reading...you've updated so much ^.^
Caro |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks at clock*Only two more hours then NEW EPISODE!
Bakura:SHUT UP!*goes to sleep*
Ryou:*curls up next to him*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!Now's the perfect time for pictures!*takes pictures*Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Anywah,POOR RYOU-CHAN!HIS DAD'S SOOOOOOOO MEAN!*cries*O_oI don't do that alot.I hated last night.I had to leave for he meet and didn't get to read til like 12:00pm!!But now track is over!YEAH!Now I can update my stories more.(which will appear soon on mm.org)Write more,live well,and play games!^________________^ |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 08:06 CST
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poor Ryou...*sniff* Where's my damn tissue? Marik's getting a little frusterated again, isn't he? *snicker* |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 07:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Those were not very nice questions! Stupid social workers...always nosing in sombody else's buisness. Ryou is gonna be a girl? How long? Whats Bakura gonna think? What will the social worker think? He has to testify!! O.O My brain hurts! Oh, and if I dont review right away on the next few chapters its because I'm not going to be able to be on the computer much next week. (So much for a nice Spring Break!) Hmph. But i'll be back as fast as I can!! Oh and the ratings,: I put 9's by writing and originality because I think that while both are very good, sometimes I think that You can do better. *Raises hands defensively* Don't hurt me! I'm just trying to help!! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: April 04, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*curled up on the couch*Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Bakura:*puts blanket on her*
Ryou:She's had along day.A track meet and she didn't get home until a little while ago.
Bakura:She managed to read this chapter but fell asleep when it was over.
*mumbles somthing then turns over*
Karona:Write more,live well,and play games!^___^ |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: April 04, 2003 21:11 CST
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Sorry i havent reviewed i had a band rehersal a bad time with my god damn period. im pms-ing and thinking of......wrong........things. Don't ask me why. I just found out a second meaning for the song the ants go marching in. I'm getting all Natasha-ish. Natasha is my weird, rude, mean, and SICK friend. When im on my period i tend to be more like her so now im yelling at the stupid cat (shadow) cause he keeps trying to stick his goddamn tail up my nose. I'm about ready to light a match. He's gonna get fur up my nose. He does it on purpose to hes the weirdest fucking goddamned cat ive ever seen in my whole damned life. anyway keep writing! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While I was reading this, I was drinking soda, an as soon as I got to thi part ''as she laughed scraping the pavement. '' I spit it out in laughter! She's so stupid! OMG! lol....I feel so bad for Malik. That must have been soooooo painful! Oh! Can I ask you a question? What YGO characters do you hate? Besides Anzu???? The only characters I hate is Anzu and Weevil. |
Reviewed By: hato-chiisai On: April 04, 2003 20:02 CST
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Next 3, huh? *giggles* Poor Malik! anzu must die. btw, I need to send you that sketch of girl Ryou... She's so cute!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AniGirl15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 19:36 CST
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NO! MALIK! Grr... ANZU MUST DIE! THERE'S BASHING, THEN THERE'S GOING TOO FAR! *tries to retrain self from killing Anzu* Ok. Yeah, I look forward to what happens when Ryou becomes a girl!
Remember that picture of Malik you found and showed me? ^_^ Just thought I'd mention it... |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 18:39 CST
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Poor Malik...I'm looking forward to him turning into a girl! I want to see how you write that. |
Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 18:39 CST
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Poor Malik...I'm looking forward to him turning into a girl! I want to see how you write that. |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 04, 2003 17:42 CST
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Oh, ow! I didn't know anyone could be THAT stupid. It just goes to show that Anzu surpasses the level of brain-dead to an unknown disease that only people like her have. The only problem is that she's basically immortal. I don't know how those poor bishies live with her around. My favorite line was "Oh, did I hit you in the naughties?" I fell over laughing. Now, dun dun dun... you've heard it a million times: Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: cheesepuff [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 17:39 CST
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Oooww.. poor Malik, heh heh. I'd like to Ryou as a girl, it'll be funny. I'll have to make a fanart of that, maybe. ^_^ The way you write Anzu, she is such a bug. I'm surprised she's not dead yet. |
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