"Seducing Duo" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jessica On: March 31, 2003 22:33 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ah, this is really cute so far! I love it! Excellent writing, cute plot, and you deliver it well! I can't wait for chappie two! |
Reviewed By: CinC On: March 28, 2003 19:00 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh, how I love to see Heero to be the one doing the seduction and Duo's reaction. It's really funny.
And how that Duo knew.
I hope I won't have to wait long for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 17:30 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: ahem! more! now! that was so not fair! what happens next, does herro succeed?? *pokes the writer* go to your computer and write more, right now, or I'm sending zero Quatre after you* |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: March 28, 2003 11:59 CST Comment/Review: That was kawaii! I like a seductive Hee-chan. It's so...unlike him. Makes the story all the more interesting! Waiting to make some lemonade...*cough* :) Continue! |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 11:41 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh but this is great! Love the way you have Heero teasing Duo, and Duo's confused reactions. Keep up the good work. Update soon. |
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