| "You Can't Destroy Evil" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooooo...good. |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great new chappie! I still need to work on mine a little longer but when it's done I'll tell you!
Yeira: WOW! This fanfic has alot happening in it!
Yana: Of course it does Yeira! What happened to you?! Is your head up in the clouds or something?!
Yeira: Not exactly. *smirks*
Fire:Oh gods Yeira! I don't need that picture in my head! Thanks alot!
Yeira: You're welcome! *giggles*
Well it was GREAT!! Can't wait to read the rest of it and Darkness! I'll try to finish the next chappie to A Darkened Past soon! PROMISE!! HEHE! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 09:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: *glares* You had better not kill Ryou.
LD: Hehehe. I *almost* feel bad for Mokuba. Poor neglected little boy.
Karen: That is sad. I mean, he can't be the center of Seto's attention all of the time, but I guess he would be feeling abandoned at this point...and then seeing Seto with Bakura...
LD: He is gonna be in therapy for years...Hey, maybe MJ could be his therapist...oh, no, wait...we've been over this already
Karen: Update again soon, please. Just remember, no killing Ryou! |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Great new chappie!!!!
Yeira: Poor Ryou! I know how you feel! *hugs Ryou*
Yana: Really?!
Yeira: SHUT UP YANA!
Fire: Nothing is going right......except for MJ of course! LOL!
Can't wait until you finish this and Darkness! Hopefully by then, those two will come out! *stares at the bedroom door* |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*steals bakura off of MJ* NOW HE'S MINE!!!!!!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Yippie, another new chapter!
LD: I acutally feel kinda bad for Ryou. I mean with the whole Seto thing... damn conservative religions (Ok, I am Catholic, well Karen is at anyrate, so I don't want anyone pissed at me for that comment)
Karen: I really do not like MJ. She is as close as you can get to pure evil. And how can she use poor Mokuba like that.
LD: Guess it come from being psychotic. She would make a great psychiatrist, that is if she could get over the pure evil thing. She is really good at getting into peoples heads. Just think of the things she could do for the good of humanity... nah, never gonna happen.
Karen: Ryou really shouldn't keep the kiss from Seto. I mean Ryou and Bakura are soulmates, or something like that and it WAS only a KISS. No secrets. Bad secrets. |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 On: April 01, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! It was GREAT!!
Yana: Poor little,Mokuba!*hugs Mokuba* It's ok. I'm here for you!
Fire: Yana's actually being nice! WOW! That's new. But I guess she knows how he feels to be alone! She was alone for MOST of her life!
Well I'll try to get my fanfic written, Dragondreamer! And Dragon, don't yell at me if I don't get it done soon! LOL!
Well bye for now!
Raine! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl On: April 01, 2003 09:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I know I reviewed this before. maybe my computer was acting up. very good! GO DRAGONDREAMER! |
Reviewed By: bEaUtIfULaNgEL21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
awww... poor mokuba..[i dink thats how yooh spell it...] so sad....... well whos dis mysterious person online??? well update SOON!!! payce outZ~! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 12:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: poor Mokuba
LD: sheesh, you are all worried about Mokuba that you didn't even notice how cool MJ is. she is friggin' obsessed with Bakura. And Keith is a slut!
Karen: in case you didn't notice, Bakura is in love with his hikari, as it should be!
LD: romantic...
Karen: psychotic...
LD: sentimental...
Karen: maniacal...
LD & Karen: FREAK!
LD: Um, sorry 'bout that.
Karen: Yeah, we both really love the story, we just have differing opinions of what makes a good story
LD: Update soon and we promise to try to stop arguing in the reviews ^.^
Karen: operative word - try
LD: -_-; |
Reviewed By: Fire Fox15 On: March 30, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! It was really good! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Even Yana liked it which was a miracle!
Yana:Of course I liked it! *evil smile* Well at least the part where MJ wants to get revenge on Seto Kaiba!*evil laugh*
Hey MJ! I'm on your side! SETO SHOULD PAY!
Yeira:Here we go again! Something else she won't get over. *giggles*
Yami: Well, I don't care that much. As long as she doesn't get over me!*kisses Yana*
Yeira: OH GOD! GET A ROOM YOU TOO! I need to call Dragon and get you two separted! HELP DRAGON!
Fire: Well It was GREAT! LOL! KEEP WRITTING! AND YANA WILL KEEP BEING ANNOYING! LOL!
Bye for now! |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
WOW. That was...incredibly HOT. I LOVED how Bakura just COULDN'T look away. It was a good way to end the chapter, too, with his struggling with the way he feels for Ryou...and his suddenly discovered desire for Seto.
MJ's brief appearance was well written. Her determination for revenge will be interesting to see as the story progresses.
Have I mentioned how HOT that scene was, though? LOL! |
Reviewed By: bEcCa On: March 28, 2003 15:54 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! update soon!!! watz gunna happen?? huh?? well Update SOON@!@!!!! im so glad you are going to continue!!! well update SOON!!! welpz lateS~! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 13:18 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: good gods.
Karen: I think she is in shock
LD: good gods.
Karen: *snickers at Lupusdragon*
LD: Seto and Ryou were NAKED!
Karen: *gasps and passes out*
LD: hehe, gets her every time. Now, my alter ego and I are very happy that you have FINALLY decided to start this sequel. I love Bakura angst. hell, I love Bakura. Please don't torture him too much. Or Seto for that matter, Karen wouldn't like it and I don't want to have to deal with an annoyed Karen.
Karen: *Waking up* Please udate soon! |
Reviewed By: Mineko and her Yami! On: May 06, 2003 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mineko: UuuuuuuUUUUUUuuuuuuuuUUUUUuuuuuUUUuuug...
Yami M.: Um... *sweatdrop* Are you okay?
Mineko: *blandly* Glorious. Never been better.
Yami M.: I think she's in shock. She's not usually this sarcastic unless it's really bad...
Mineko: *runs around the room in circles, screaming loudly*
Yami M.: *multiple sweatdrops* You're going to step on the cat... Hey, you do know there's another chapter on Stronger than Before too, right?
Mineko: *stares blankly* Um... no...
Yami M.: *waves hand in front of hikari's face*
Mineko: WELL, WHY DID'T YOU TELL ME EARLIER?
Yami M.: *has heart attack*
Mineko: *click, click* |
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