| "Lost Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really gut wrenching. I understand Hilde's obsession but it was her own fault for deluding herself. I can understand the embarrassment and shame Duo felt and given his enviroment he did what he had to do to survive. I'm happy for all the kids who found new homes and families. I read small prequal to this for Quatra and Trowa and I enjoyed the self analysis of what Trowa felt he was missing. Very nice job. Your a very talented writer and I look forward to reading many more of your stories. I think you count at this point is 80. WOW. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 12:42 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories, they are so cool!! Could You Right A Sequel? Great story Gonna read prequel.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a wonderful story! Great lemony ending! ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy Heero found DUO!!!! I like your writing style! sniff... I wish I could bop that stupid Hilde... sigh. Onward to sequel (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Karista2 On: August 31, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Story was so good. It kept me on my toes. I love this story so much. I love how Heero became soft and learn how to love some one and learn how to be happy. I am glad that he found Duo. |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 14:18 CDT
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*sigh* It's over? What a nice ending! do you think there'll be a lost souls 2? |
Reviewed By: DBZVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 09:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my, what a lovely story. I couldn't wait for each chpater to be updated. Your visualizations were wonderful. I felt that I could see everything that was happening.
Thank you for this story ~ DBZ Vegeta |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
schweeeeet! Awesome, lovely lemony ending, as usual. Loved this fic...the OC's were perfect! Kiitos! kkls, Leth |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wah!!! I wanted toby!!!
*sniff**pout* Meanie....glad it'sa happy ending....great story. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really, really like Shane, he's got to be one of my favorite OC. Maybe he can stay w/ Trowa & Quatre, they really connect? |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 08, 2003 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I am so happy with this new chapter! It is absolutely perfect and I want more. I am so greedy. I wanna know what happens though! Please
write again soon and keep the great chapters coming! I think you are doing a great job!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 14:26 CDT
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i still like the story and i still want to adopt toby |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
jeeze, do you really need that much build up? could have ended the chapter w/ heero telling duo he loves him. update soon! |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I've been waiting for this. Love the story and can't wait for the rest. Will be waiting inpatiently for the next installment. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 06, 2003 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT RIGHT THERE????? IT WAS
GETTING TO THE BEST PART AND THEN YOU JUST CUT US OFF!!!!!!!!!!!! INJUSTICE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON I NEED TO KNOW WHAT IS G0ING TO HAPPEN.
I WANT HEE-CHAN AND DUO TO BE HAPPY AND TOGETHER FOR EVER AND EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria |
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