| "Parliament Of Twilight" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: englishmeninnewyork On: May 24, 2004 20:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWESOME YOU MUST KEEP GOING! MUST FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS< VERY DESPERATE> PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon1 On: December 26, 2003 00:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA!! Seto and jou are out of char but who cares this was such a cute and funny fic please update soon this fic is a lot of fun to read
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Reviewed By: zinx On: September 24, 2003 00:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You might have run out of time during spring break but why didn't you wrote over summer ? now its alredy the first month of school and there are still no updates. Kaite kudasai soon , arigatoo gozaimus .
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Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shutters at the thought of Dr.J naked in a tutu* Eeewww.... i feel dirty.. EEwwwww! other than that this is a kick ass story! pretty plz update again soon! plz??? *temps you with cookies* |
Reviewed By: starlite On: July 18, 2003 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved this story! You have a wondreful writing style. Write more soon, Please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ryou_Yoru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I love this fic! It has a great plot line, but you havent updated in the longest time! WHY?!?! Please update!! Please!! I love this story! It's da bomb! I was almost crying when Seto gave Jou those lashes...That was my favorite part,. But you should continue this! Please!?!?!? Pretty please?!?! At least write a lemon in epilouge(cant spell today...) Please!! I really want to know what happens next! Please!!!
Luv,
Ryou_Yoru/Sakura Li |
Reviewed By: sprinket On: June 29, 2003 04:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so great please put the next chapter up please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think i will die if u don cause that was amazing so please put the next one up or write a similar one k |
Reviewed By: DARKstar On: June 27, 2003 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVED you story,be sure to finish it up!!
(setoxjoey rules, there the best!!) |
Reviewed By: crazy On: April 04, 2003 23:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic ^_^ please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kael(dra) Hawkins, though please call me Hawk On: April 02, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! And if you need a beta reader, I volunteer! (Like I don't have enough to do, but oh well!) |
Reviewed By: Kitsune Hashiba On: March 31, 2003 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
=^_^= That was good as always.... FF.N's screwing up on me and saying your story isn't there so I've gotta use MM.O.... I don't like this place, they scare me... Anyways, wasn't it Dr G? That had the mushroom cut, Dr J was the one with the mechanical hand, that Heero responded to, not Duo.... oh well. The story was good though. I wanna see more! =^_^= |
Reviewed By: Caps On: March 31, 2003 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is really cool. I didn't get to review on ff.net, so I thought I'd do it here. Everything was great except spelling/grammar, but I understand about you not not having a beta reader. Can't wait for the next part!
Oh, by the way, Dr. J was the scientist w/ the prosthetic-y mechanical arm or hand or whatever, and Professor G was the one w/ the big nose and mushroom hair you were talking about. Just thought I'd clear that up. |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 13:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Awww, how cute!
LD: *shakes head at alter ego*
Karen: I wish you wouldn't call ME YOUR alter ego. However, not the point. that was totally adorable!
LD: I don't think it makes sense for Seto to suddenly be so kind to Jou. I mean, he goes from whipping the boy to comforting him.
Karen: it is supposed to be romantic, stupid
LD: *mummbles something about needing lessons on insulting people from Jou*
Karen: *smiles brightly* please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 07:30 CST
Comment/Review:
ooohh..good! So, do we get a lemon? Pretty please? and update soon! |
Reviewed By: KC Matthews On: March 31, 2003 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you story. Your style was goo and so was everything else. I nearly teared when it was taken off Fanfiction.net. so I saw this site address on the summary so i came here to read the story. I love it! |
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