| "Condition of the Souls" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 16:51 CDT
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please update soon im hooked!
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Reviewed By: Twilight Myst [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! Update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Kagome-chan2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update and fast!!! hopefull by this monday... love ur work
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Reviewed By: cuffers On: July 06, 2004 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit I'm intrigued........Your start is interesting and the turn of the 2 brothers having to work together and get along is also intriguing to see how it unfolds and the details of the tour through time.........keep it up.
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Reviewed By: someonesomewhere On: April 15, 2004 19:17 CDT
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Hi K005 again wait a minit did you say that you say a guy with white hair at Disney world!!! any way i loved the chapter pls update
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Reviewed By: iire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 21:53 CST
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a lot of OOC, but enjoyable none the less.
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Title: AWESOME FIC.
Reviewed By: Shawna On: January 18, 2004 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more iloved it and u left everyone at a cliffhanger...so please write more...i'm begging u*pleeding eyez*...PLEASE
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Reviewed By: someone somewhere On: January 17, 2004 06:04 CST
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Hey K005 here again i was able to register on media miner YAY FOR ME well any way i loved the fic its totaly awsome pls update
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Reviewed By: K005 On: December 23, 2003 15:39 CST
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hey love the fic its totaly awsome
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Reviewed By: ILoveInu! On: November 04, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow everyone in this story is way OOC! Kagome would never think some of the stuff you have her thinking, and Inuyasha already knows about bathing suits it was in one the first episodes. You turned Inuyasha into a whinie baby about everything, like the rings? If he were in character he wouldn't care that Kagome got two things just so long as his had power and he would actually tease her about it, and I doubt that he would act so childish in front of his own mother and father. I hope this is your first fanfic cause you got a lot to learn.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the plot for the story but it started to get a little confusing at some points. It seemed like the story focused too much on Kagome's thoughts and actions and no one elses', we were always in her mind and seeing things from her point of view. And the story kept changing from 'she' to 'my' in med-sentence, it was like one minute Kagome was the narrator and then it back into her thoughts in the same sentence that was confusing. Not one fic I've read so far thought of sending Inuyasha back to mee his dad, very cool.
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Reviewed By: Ruia Motou On: September 09, 2003 19:21 CDT
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i vote for rin as Sess-chan's mate, and this is a awesome story! please contiue! |
Reviewed By: Desha On: September 01, 2003 03:08 CDT
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i vote for Two youkai mates |
Reviewed By: Trysh On: August 24, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope 10 means highest. I thoroughly enjoy this story, and would enjoy it even more if i could continue it without waiting for another chapter....please stop teasing. .. more, more, more!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 03:24 CDT
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Great fic at first i was like oookkk a talking tree but then it made more sense and your fic is great! Kawaii little Sess-chan!
Vote- 1 hanyou mate 1 youkai mate |
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