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"When Love Strikes an Enemy" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ]
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 Reviewed By: Nankinmai  On: March 31, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
very interesting indeed...

the spelling is correct, at least to me. in "tetsusaiga", the "u" in silent in the pronouciation since it is right after the "s". (at least thats what a friend told me...) the sango's weapon is the hiraikotsu, i think...
 Reviewed By: Nuala [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good start. I'd like to read more of it.

How to spell that dang sword's name... A complicated answer to an easy question:

First, to me it sounds like "te-sI-ga." When written in episode titles (like #54), the hiragana characters are te-tsu-sa-i-ga. However, the 'tsu' is little, which I think means it's not pronounced, just used to separate the syllables. I think in romanization, you show that by doubling the consonnant, so "tessaiga." But I could be wrong -- my Japanese is lousy, and I've seen both "tetsusaiga" and "tessaiga."
 Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2003 22:18 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
pwease continue the story!!!!!!!!
besides, why did sesshy go to her?!?!
tell me!!!!
 Reviewed By: claudia67g  On: April 06, 2003 14:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
so far interesting.

Im glad your not rushing i hate sess/kag stories that just rush into each other.

He has just started to learn about feelings from Rin and he would be very difficult to unchill his heart.

so i look forward to the melting process.
claudia
 Reviewed By: Dark cat [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 06, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good
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