| "The Deepest Disire" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Me.. On: April 04, 2003 22:31 CST
Comment/Review:
You should continue....by the way, you know A Single Spark site (Sess/Kag site) and fanfiction.net??? You can put this fic there......... :) |
Reviewed By: caley On: April 04, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a mean cliffy but stil like it |
Reviewed By: fluffy-sama'sfollower On: April 04, 2003 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really cool fic! please continue!!!!!!
i only have one thing to say..sesshomaru-sama uses "this sesshomaru" when he's speaking first person ..but i love this fic!!! |
Reviewed By: silverbutterfly On: April 03, 2003 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story...hehe...Inu can be such an Idiot...and you protrayed him so well :) as for fluffy...well...i want to read more so update when you can.
Silver |
Reviewed By: Christina On: April 03, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Tis wonderful, my dear. lol! It's really good. As usual, your writing exceedes that of the average level. |
Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!! MORE I BEG OF You i think that it's creative plese update soon read mine and tell me what you think!!!
paper heart~ |
Reviewed By: fey On: April 03, 2003 13:59 CST
Comment/Review:
first person pov generally sucks, too onesided. otherwise, very good so far. pleasing to continue |
Reviewed By: adorable akane On: April 02, 2003 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue! But don't use "I" anymore for sesshoumaru, its so dumb.Not that i'm calling your story dumb, I really like!! |
Reviewed By: spaghettios09 On: April 02, 2003 15:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought the story was good and a little bit funny. But other wise u did a really really great job on it |
Reviewed By: Jenn On: April 02, 2003 09:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Heheheehehehehee... This is cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: caley On: April 01, 2003 22:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i liked it and wan't to read more hope u review soon |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ithink your story was ok. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Munku-JGSPTV On: April 03, 2003 04:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Please fix up that spelling from Sesshie's POV onwards. Just that last bit seemed a little rushed, so take your time when writing. ^_^ Someone else suggested no more SessPOV *shrugs* I suppose. yeah.umm.. what was I going to say? :S Oh yes. I could actually imagine someone doing what Kagome's doing. I say to my friends that if I was going to kill myself, I'd probably do it to hurt someone. The ultimate. But I dunno if I'd actually go through with it. Oh well. *sigh* Post again soon! |
Reviewed By: ittymonster On: May 07, 2003 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left me hanging!!!! I wanna know what happens next! WHAT HAPPENS?!?!?!?! by the way, great story. exciting and suspenseful. my fave. |
Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemons...well....lol..:::blushes::: i guess they just come to me, mainly just think of embraces and what you'd like to be done to you, to get into the moment. work it into the story but don't make it all like just sticking out there, like they are fighting one minute and tehn the next they jsut happen to be naked and ready to mate....lol...that sounds funny... anyways i love this story, SEsshoumaru's emotional side should be shown more often people want to see him alway so stioc and serious, but i think there is definetly more there then mr.no-personality.
anywho, wonderful story i red your other one too, the one about the cd player, it made me laugh so much lol.
so anywho tata for now
~paperheart~ |
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