Reviewed By: paperheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemons...well....lol..:::blushes::: i guess they just come to me, mainly just think of embraces and what you'd like to be done to you, to get into the moment. work it into the story but don't make it all like just sticking out there, like they are fighting one minute and tehn the next they jsut happen to be naked and ready to mate....lol...that sounds funny... anyways i love this story, SEsshoumaru's emotional side should be shown more often people want to see him alway so stioc and serious, but i think there is definetly more there then mr.no-personality.
anywho, wonderful story i red your other one too, the one about the cd player, it made me laugh so much lol.
so anywho tata for now
~paperheart~ |
