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Title: umm...
Reviewed By: Shadow's Light On: January 18, 2005 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would be a ten but i find the topic odd... though strangly arousing. Just Kidding. Good writing though.
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Reviewed By: StormTheHedgechidna [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 16:12 CST
Comment/Review:
"..........WTF?!....u are 1 sick.....psyco...story or not... I mean WTF?!"
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Title: I cried too...
Reviewed By: Funkmasterjo On: November 22, 2004 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great. This is one of the best pieces of work i've seen, why can't eaveryone write like this? The world would be a better place, war and famine could possibly cease to exist as we would all be to happy to be as petty as normal. Anyways, I liked it a lot, I'm off to check your other work now. Actually, if this fic were not a one-shot it would have trully been a momentous occasion, indeed. (heh, 499 charecters in the body)
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Reviewed By: j On: October 11, 2004 05:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
As far as writing goes, it was excellent (as many people have already said). The only problem I found was I disagree with incest and sex before marrage. But, each to their own. As I said, writing wise, excellent. Keep up the good work.
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Title: o_o
Reviewed By: Hapi_San On: October 10, 2004 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus christ this is sick... I loved every word of it. :P
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Title: Flamers are fags.
Reviewed By: Fuckyouflamers On: September 24, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ALL OF YOU FLAMERS OUT THERE CAN GO SUCK YOUR MOMS DICK. I SAID IT ONCE I'LL SAY IT AGAIN IF YOU DON'T LIKE IT DON'T REVIEW IT. YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH INCEST THEN DON'T READ IT YOU DUMB FUCKS. YOU KNOW IF YOU READ THE FIRST FEW LINES YOU CAN TELL IT'S INCEST YOU SHOULD HAVE STOPPED THERE. NO YOU HAVE TO GO AND TALK SHIT ABOUT A GREAT FIC REGUARDLESS IF YOU READ IT OR NOT. THIS IS A GOOD FIC THE AUTHOR IS GOODS ITS ALL GOOD BUT YOU LITTLE PUSSY BITCHS HAVE TO TALK SHIT. YOU PROBABLY DON'T LIKE IT BECAUSE IT'S SO MUCH BETTER THEN THE POOR EXCUSE FOR SHIT THAT YOU POST. SO REMEMBER IF YOU DON'T LIKE...DON'T FUCKIN READ IT!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: crazy eyes On: September 03, 2004 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was some sick shit... im not sure whether to vomit or applaud...
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Title: SO FUCKIN GOOD
Reviewed By: SEX QUEEN On: August 11, 2004 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mman this story so good i humped my bed and mastrbated..ooo yeah
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Reviewed By: Jarock16 On: August 09, 2004 11:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this back on Adultfanfiction.net and like I said there, I'll say it here. O.O OH MY RA, This is one of the best I've read! One of the most well written fics I've seen. Hope you can do a sequal to this one.
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Reviewed By: Scary-red-eyes On: August 07, 2004 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Q_Q (Eye twitching) (Shuddering) (Breath not, er, being breathed) (No Comment...)
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Reviewed By: FUCK YOU ASSHOLE! On: April 26, 2004 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
... dude... why? it was sick and wrong! a 13-year old guy having sex with his mom... YOU ARE A GAY FUCKING BITCH-ASS BASTARD!!!!
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Title: The Flame
Reviewed By: Johnny_Bluefire03 On: April 01, 2004 00:24 CST
Comment/Review:
its just a story guys... lighten up. I have one word for this story... *BOING*
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 31, 2004 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, it's an interesting ediphus (did I spell that right?) complex that you gave Ash. But, why not continue this? It's quite good.
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Reviewed By: GREAT On: March 06, 2004 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT FUCKING FIC INCEST RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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