| "The Hunters" Reviews/Comments [ 106 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kenn On: June 16, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi!
i started reading thins story yesterday, and i really enjoyed it ^^(ok, that was an understatement, im hooked:p) i hope you continue this story, i relly look forward to the next chapter.
i think you should give Jou an item, i dun know which, cuz im not that faimiliar with the series, but ill try to understand it more>< |
Reviewed By: kylawild On: June 16, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and if you don't continue I think I may cry. Well, maybe not cry but I'd be rather upset.
Sorry for not reviewing before but I don't usually review. I also figured that since this was a good story you were recieving reviews from all over. Bad guess on my part.
Anyways, I dunno about the pairings. I like Mokuba/Serenity and Honda/Otogi (are those the right names?) I'd kinda like to see Isis (I can't remember the other name right now) paired with someone but I don't know who.
As to an item for Jou, is it really necessary? I guess it would make it fit with the rest of the group more. The only problem is I don't know all the items. I know the puzzle, ring, rod, eye, necklace and this one other one that Seto had in another story. Sorry but I can't help you on this as I like Isis with the necklace and how would they get the Eye away from Pegasus?
One little question though. You know how you have the hunters changing into certain animals? Yami->dog, Seto->cat, Marik->ferret; what is it that Bakura turns into? I didn't recognize the name at all.
Thanks for reading this and an even bigger thanks for writing the story. Please, please, PLEASE, don't stop with this one. I love your Yin & Yang fic as well. (That is you right? ::sweatdrop::) Don't stop that one either. |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: June 16, 2003 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it would be a shame to stop writing this as i look most days to see if you have updated - i'm sorry to say i'm really bad at reviewing a story cause if i like it that's all i ever say - and it is a good story - as to adding other charcters - if it can go with the plot line then if you wish to add them - with regards to a m/item - jou is already special enough if you give him too much i think it would lose the way he is - good story though and i will try and be a responabile reader and review more often - hopefully you will continue this though |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan35 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Christine Feehan! She's the bomb! I'm so glad someone has used her ideas in a fic, it makes e happy. By the way, this is good!
Your Fan and Fellow Author,
Neko-chan35 |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 10:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Please continue the stroy. I would miss it if you stopped ;_;
LD: Hey, contragts on the job. Money is good ^_^ Hey, if you continue (please, please, please)I think Otogi and Shadi together as hunters would be cool! Then, how about... Mai as a hunter with Honda... and Anzu with Keith as a good guy.
Karen: Weird.
LD: *shrugs * I like the unconventional. Besides, I want to see Mai summon the Harpy Lady. ^_^
Karen: That would be cool. So please give us another chapter. PPPPLLLLLEEEAAAASSSSSE |
Reviewed By: Lady Bum [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think that Jou should get a thingy, but I don't now all of them so... Please update soon. This is my favorite Yugioh fanfic. |
Reviewed By: myst-ikal On: June 16, 2003 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO NOT EVEN THINK OF QUITTING THIS STORY!!!!! I look forward to reading your updates, and though this is my first time writing a review for it, I'm sure there are many people that love this story as much as I do.
Vote:
1# - I think that you should leave the couples as is and not add any more, unless you're going to make your chapters longer. I belive that if you add more couples/characters, then you're taking away story time from the couples you already have.
2# I'm not saying that I don't like Jou, because I do but NO, Jou should NOT have an item! He's a very strong quarter vampire and will make a very powerful full, why does he need a item? If he has one; from what you've written about him, he might be stronger than Yami! Especially if he's able to draw power from the item.
Maybe Shadi could have the rest and they have to play a Shadow Game or something to get them. Or have a couple of them buried in Yami's tomb or scattered all over the world and they could have a ton of adventures finding them. |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 16, 2003 09:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm loving your story but I'm not reviewing all the chapters because my english sucks.
I'm fine reading but not writing.
You'r doing a great job here, please don't stop. |
Reviewed By: Alexis On: June 16, 2003 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!! My friend, Shadow told me to read this and it's good and I'm glad to read it.
Vote 1: I wanna Otogi to be like Yami!!! And, Mokuba too since he's Seto's little brother but make him a half.
Vote 2: I think he should have one and I vote for that... what's it call? The key, is it? Oh well. That the item I want him to have. |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 04:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
JC: Heheheheeee......*Sweatdrops* There we no other votes.
Kathrine: See this is why I don't usually listen to her.
JC: If you didn't usually listen to me every blonde bushounen that we liked would have been tortured to death or shoved in our closet.
Kathrine: We don't have a closet...
JC: We do have clothes racks.
Kathrine: Like the hooks in meat lockers? I can hang 'em up on 'em? *Looks hopeful*
JC: 0.0 No... Okay... we really need to end this. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 04:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: MORE!! KEEP WRITING!!
Kathrine: We only really started to get into this story a few days ago 'cause they're are a lot of stories out there.
JC: Yeah and we're sick and since it's summer we have more time on our hands. And we definitely are in love! And I do mean LOVE!!!
Kathrine: This has everything we like in it. Vampires, Hunters, mix breeds, YAOI, citrus, and Jou nearly dying. ^_^
JC: The last one's just her. Now we hope you DO decide to keep going with this. Even if FFNet getting slow MMOrg still loves ya. ^_^
Kathrine: Okay so we have to do these votes. You could add in Otogi as a Hunter that is in love with Pegasus (blindly we might add^_~) and tries to please him by going after the Hunters' mates.
JC: As soon as we read the one chapter we immediately thought of Mai as Jou's grandmother. It seems so 'Mai' to throw someone in a river. Mokuba could somehow meet Serenity by sneaking to Japan to help his brother (Such a Mokuba thing to do^_~) and becomes friends, definitely causing a problem.
Kathrine: Only because Keith could be something like a not fully turned vampire (Like Jou's dad) that goes by Pegasus' will and attacks Jou's family while Mokuba is with Serenity. Think about, Jou's family is the only one that hasn't really been targeted.
JC: Well, that's actually in Japan anyway. Yes Jou should have an item, but I hate the Millennium Scales. It's so weak from what we've heard. Maybe you could give him the mellenium key? It kinda set off the way people usually see him as thick-headed.
Kathrine: Only 'cause he would have the key to get into a person's head.
JC: Well, we'll review again in a few 'cause we don't remember what the last vote was. *Sweatdrops* Could have something to do with the length of this review. *Sweatdrops again*
Kathrine: Be right back... |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: June 03, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story that u did my sister told me about it so i had to read it mt self. It was great.... there is going to be more right? ^_~ I hope to be reading more if there is any. Agine Nice job! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari On: June 03, 2003 11:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
one word.....fantastic!!!!
loved it and i can't wait to see what happens next. pwease update soon! *chibi eyes*
~Fallen Hikari~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: ray On: June 02, 2003 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i have nothing to say be, but you did a very go job on writing this story.i really enjoyed it. you sould write alot more to become a great writer |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 07:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Yami and Yugi are great! Mutual teases. They are perfect for each other.
LD: Yugi must be really powerful if he can shadow Yami's mind undetected. That or Yami is completely destracted.
Karen: Heh, either or.
LD: Yay, yay yay! Good stuff. Add more soon! Pretty please! |
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