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"Vengeance of a Prince" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ]
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 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome chapter! What will Gohan and Piccolo do to Bulma besides ending her existence which couldn't please me more. And what about Goku and Vegeta? Will they become mates? Hurry with the next chapter!!
 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 05, 2003 02:22 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Piccolo would rather die than let anything happen to Gohan. He loves him too much. What about Vegeta and Goku? Will Vegeta accept Goku's love or brush it off? And what about Pan? Will she good on her vow to have Vegeta at any cost? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2003 00:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the lemons between Gohan and Piccolo and I'm glad that Piccolo completed the bond between them, but what will this mean for Vegeta? And what about Goku and Vegeta? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2003 00:12 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the lemons between Gohan and Piccolo and I'm glad they are mates and all, but what will this mean for Vegeta? And what about Goku and Vegeta? Hurry with the next chapter!!
 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 11, 2003 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Chi Chi is dead? HOORAY!!! PARTY TIME!! Now, maybe Gohan won't be such a dork. I hope things between him and Piccolo work out okay. I really like them as a couple and what will happen between Goten and Vegeta? Something or nothing? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
 Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2003 17:17 CDT
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O.o what's this??!! I was definitely not expecting an understanding Vegeta! but it works. I guess if anyone would receive mercy it would be Goten. Great job.
 Reviewed By: gnossos [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2003 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
GOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDD this is good. one of the best i've read here. original and completely insane, i love it! keep writing & updating, this is fucking great.
 Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*looks up to where it says title* Please, don't ask, it just helps me release sexual pleasure overloads ^^; Damn you... stop at such a madingly goooooooooood pppppppppllllllllaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaccccccccccccceeeeee!!!!
I outta rip your head off, but I really couldn't do that now because I wanna read bout Goten and Vegeta getting it on WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAaHHHhhHhhodf;vbjspd yummy ^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^-^

Fire fire fire fire fire fire!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 26, 2003 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mewowy =^~= This fic just keeps on getting better and better and better and better and... oh, I think you get the point. Make Gohan kill more more more MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEE!!!! An evil Gohan is a sexy Gohan LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!! >=-B Update soon. Meow.
 Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2003 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooh, Vegeta's got some serious torture planned for Gohan!! Of course I wouldn't have expected any less. :) Can't wait to see what's next.
 Reviewed By: XZanayu [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2003 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What will Piccolo do to help Gohan deal with his problem and how will he keep Vegeta from killing him? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
 Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 23, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
 Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 11, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
And I never say that either. I mean, I'm a bonafied daughter of the devil and I'm freaked. I LOOOOOOVE how you made Gohan a murderer. I always knew Nerd-O had the balls to be evil like my dark Saiyan Prince (glomps Vegeta) Do as I Princess of Hell Circle 9 says and continue this fic. I'M LOVIN' IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >=p
 Reviewed By: K-chan  On: June 01, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is so fucked up -- and I love it! Man...Trunks is gonna wish he had stayed dead by the time this fic is done! Heh.
 Reviewed By: Khandy  On: May 19, 2003 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, I just read the latest chapter and had to raise my eyebrows at the scene where Chichi was beaten beyond recognition.

Now, I really had no beef with you kill everyone else like you did. Hell, I'm glad you killed Bura (and might i add having her slip and fall and breaking her neck was great!) Bura didn't deserve an honourable death seeing has she a waste of saiyan blood. So good show to that!

But Chichi....I couldn't help but felt sorry for her. Couldn't you have had Bulma beat like that?
I really hope you have her viciously killed. You know, decapitated or something...and perferably by Vegeta. Yeah, that would be sweet!

*looks hopefully at Jady & Shi-saiyan for the next sadistic chapter*

Tootles ladies!
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