| "Fractured Fairytales" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: ff:cf
Reviewed By: Roxanne On: April 27, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great fic. I love the Vegeta OOCness at the beginning and the end. The fairytale was great. I would have perfered a little more lemon, such as the happily ever after, but it was great none the less. cant wait to read the next fics, (Rdoujima)
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Reviewed By: Tatoosh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 03:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Totally mised the hypnosis but I'm reviewing anyways. I hope there are more. Who wants to sleep if there can be other great stories from the mind of Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Dark Fate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
*snicker* Poor little Trunks... Hiliarious fic. Keep them coming. I, for one, want to see what else you can come up with. ~_^ |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 07:43 CDT
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What an utterly brilliant idea!! :)) God, Veggiekins is meant to disturb poor little Trunks like that!! Was he gently preparing him for the day he finds out about Veggie and Goku, or was it revenge for bothering him about his (Trunks') nightmare??
Excellent story, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it... More please!! :D |
Reviewed By: SenshiBulma75@aol.com On: April 15, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! lol that was one of the cutest yaoi fics I have ever read, lol. Loeved the slight ever after tidbits in it too. chao ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, that was cute. I wonder what Trunks thinks of his dear ol' daddy now he he he ^_^ |
Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA HA HA........HAHAHAHAHA
AFTER THIS STORY I'M GOING TO NEED THERAPY.
GOOD JOB. |
Reviewed By: ZeroRyoko On: April 09, 2003 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gods....
Good thing Bulma can afford all the therapy Trunks is going to need!!! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
-zombie face- muuust... review... fiiic....
I'm not sure if Vegeta would actually make up a fic with this much... uh, fluff? But it was funny as hell, and I totally want to read the consumation of their union! XD |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rule I loved this story like the rest of your fics.HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAhA Trunks life has been scarred!!! Vegeta is so cute!!!!! Oh bot never in my life was the ciderella story so twisted!!!!
*chokes from laughter*
Ahem im ok now Well Must dash !
Love ya!, keep those fics on coming!
LateR! |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it! More please. And keep Vegeta as the main character, eh? thanks! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: Wooo! SaintMe's writing again! *happy dance*
Vegeta: *growls and folds arms* WHY do people ALWAYS pair me with that insolant fool?!
Me: *wraps arms around his waist* It makes for some goooooood reading, Veggie-chan! ^-~
Vegeta: You are such a pervert.
Me: *kawaii face* I KNOW! Dont'cha just love me?
Vegeta: *rolls his eyes*
Me: *shakes her head* *turns to SaintMe* Hey, babe! I loved this fic! It was the perfect comeback fic! *gives a thumbs up* I'd love to stay and chat, but i have ....THINGS...to do!
Vegeta: *sweatdrop*
Me: *grins evilly and drags Vegeta off to the broom closet* |
Reviewed By: me On: April 06, 2003 04:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story. WEIRD story. Never heard Cinderella involving sex changes before. But entertaining nevertheless. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Ha ha! Trunks has just been scarred for life!
But it was a damn funny story!
Loved it. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO!! Rocky and Bullwinkle's Fractured Fairytales were never THIS much fun!!
Brilliant fic (especially since it took all of an hour or so to write???), lots of fun. Poor Trunks probably didn't sleep again for a WEEK! You know he told Goten the next day, who told ChiChi, who then bashed Goku in the head with her frying pan, who then went to Vegeta to question the story...insert your own lemon here.
Now am I correct in assuming that this is the first of a series?? YAAAAAAY!!! Do Sleeping Beauty next!! Of course Trunks will have to be the beauty, and Vegeta the king...hmmm...who will be the handsome prince who will awaken him?? ~.^ |
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