| "Come What May" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: gourrina_chan On: October 21, 2001 20:52 CDT
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Interesting I wonder would you place the reincarnation of kenshin into this fic it sould be a better pair other than that mamoru!!! |
Reviewed By: Mavan On: October 22, 2001 16:33 CDT
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this is awsome! write more soon please! and hurry and bring in Sano and Kenshin! |
Reviewed By: Jurai (jurai@knight-sabers.net) On: November 10, 2001 22:05 CST
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I really like your fic. I'm glad you explained why you chose USagi to be Kaoru in another life. You certinly weren't going on looks. I like how you have all the Kenshin-gumi come in with their characteristics in tact. I think you may overdo the Japanese thing, but I loved how you worked anime elements like fox ears and fire behind Rei. You should continue with that as Kenshin and Sailor Moon are two extremely expressive animes, both with lots of sweat drops, etc. Continue with this when you get a chance. You have a great knowledge of both anime and express it greatly. You word usage (English words) is really good. You write Usagi well, I think. This has potential. I'd like to see what you do after Chapter 2. I'm really really interested in where you're going with this. What exactly is the point of bringing these two animes together, two animes that normally wouldn't be linked? What will the foe/problem/conflict in this? I hope you update soon so I can answer at least some of these questions.
-Jurai |
Reviewed By: Jurai (again) On: November 10, 2001 22:06 CST
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My e-mail is Jurai@knight-sabers.com, not .net. It's a new e-mail...I'll get used to it soon I hope. |
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