| "Bitter" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bender On: May 27, 2003 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
You must update soon! I hate cliffhangers and you left off when it was getting good! |
Reviewed By: mylexy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 15:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn it! Duo should have walked her al the way. Poor Dottie. Just when she was finally happy with Quatre. Update quick!! |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: May 26, 2003 15:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH! That's all I have to say about that. Damn that was harsh. I'll never forgive ya if she doesn't make it! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Misao Soup On: May 26, 2003 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Cow! Poor Dorothy! That's mesed up. I can't wait for the next update...what a cliffhanger. Geez. |
Reviewed By: kashychic On: May 08, 2003 08:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
more stooooorrrrrryyy!!! this is the BEST fic i have ever read!! |
Reviewed By: Teda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dorothy is awesome in this. Although I'm not usually for 4 x D, the plot makes it good enough for me. |
Reviewed By: mylexy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2003 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written and the characters are realistic. Especially Dorothy's evil, queen bitch mom. Quatre and Dorothy are so perfect. |
Reviewed By: my parents are jerks! On: April 17, 2003 22:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'd be 'Bitter' to if I had that evil witch for a mother too. You have to write more and soon. And more lemons. |
Reviewed By: Bender On: April 10, 2003 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre and Dorothy are cute! Well, opposites do attract. So how is the mom going to con Dorothy into marrying Quatre? |
Reviewed By: Misao Soup On: April 10, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a bitch and I don't mean Dorothy. Mommy dearest is a scheming witch. I like Dorothy even more than ever now. |
Reviewed By: Perry D. On: April 09, 2003 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, hurry up and write more. I could go for some more lemony goodness. |
Reviewed By: gethmane8 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Quatre is one of my favorites since he's so cute and cuddly. But in this...whoa! |
Reviewed By: gx-Sliver On: April 08, 2003 11:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tight lemon! More please. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Misao Soup On: April 07, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dorothy and Quatre are such an odd couple, but I can't help but like the idea. Although, Dorothy's eyebrows are really scary. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Excel Saga On: April 13, 2003 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAHHHHHHHH! I'm screaming like crazy over this. Quatre is my favorite and a hottie. Since I like him in yaoi or not, this pairing w/ Dorothy was hot. |
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