| "I Never Knew" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: July 06, 2003 20:40 CDT
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Snaps for Bishojo ::snap snap snap:: HAHAHAAAA Baku to the resque!!! muhahahaha Yami got the stuffing beat outta him yea yea yea ::claps.and.dances:: Oh no Yugi don't do anything stupid! ::hugglez::
The * Queen Of Games |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 18:02 CDT
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Of course you're on my faves list why wouldn't you be? |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 18:01 CDT
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GO Bakura! Go Seto! And Marick's Rod too! YEA!!!!
All of you Kick Yami's ass for hurting my Ryou, and get Marik and Malik involved while you're at it!!!!!!!
Yami should be eliminated! And I know the best way possible. He should be killed by Yugi who he wouldn't hurt for anything, not even to defend himself, and Yami wouldn't be expecting it. And of course there's all the poetic justice involved with the one he loves destroying him and so forth. It's just a suggestion feel free to disregard it if you don't like it, I'm just a sucker for angst. ^_^'
(Get's onto her knees and begs) More updates please!!!!! I love your story!!!
(Sudden insight strikes as she remembers something and gets off the floor.)
Oh and by the way whoever said your fics suck should die a slow and painful death after being strapped to a pole and raped by devil worshipping penguins who offer him/her to their master as a blood sacrifice to release him on all stupid flamers everywhere. I volunteer to help!!!!!
Cody's Muse--(See's what she just wrote) O_o'
"NANI?!?!?! WHAT THE?!?! Oh...wait, yeah I forgot. (Breathes again) She gets really anal about flamers, especially if they are someone whose writing she likes. But, uh...Cody, where did the 'Devil worshiping penguin' thing come from?"
It just came now behave and shut up before I let Pain out of her cage!
Cody's muse -- Pain in in a depressive phase right now, she wouldn't come out and attack right now, she'd just sit there and brood.
Darn. Oh well, I still volunteer to help!!!
Cody's Muse --(under her breath)You would.
What was that?!
Cody's Muse -- Nothing nothing now don't you have a story of your own to finish?
Yea yea yea I get the hint. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: July 05, 2003 20:00 CDT
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Lol I had to look up ignominy! BIIIIIG WORD for this blonde girl lol! Snaps for you ::snap snap snap:: ::whimpers:: poor Ryou-Chewy! my poor pet :_( ::cries:: WHY!?! Ohhh the sadness! |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 19:17 CDT
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Yeah!!! Another chappie!!! Oh, and in the future, i would like a chappie in which Yami dies, but is tortured by ... Yugi!!! Not physically, but mentally, using words. |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know who said that BULL SHIT about your fics because i know for a fact that your fics are the shit!!!!!!!!!! Don't let that one jackass reviewer ruin your day 'cause i know that you can write girl! See, now i'm mad. If i ever find out who it was... *growl* |
Reviewed By: a-yolanda13 On: July 02, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is very nice!! Very very nice!! You have to update this very soon!!!
Sometimes when Yami tortured Ryou he looked a bit like Akito from Fruits Basket, but maybe it's only in my imagination! Anyway, your story is VERY NICE and you HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! |
Reviewed By: Zanzou On: July 01, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now for some constructive critisism....
I've read most of your fics, and have been following a bunch of them for quite a while now. You have good (re: fun & evil) plots, and you update quite often. You do have some problems, but they're easily taken care of if you feel like taking the time.
1- plot out your fics. Get an outline, and what goes in which chapter. This may prevent you from updating as often, but your chapters might be longer and the plot more flowing (notice what happened to Father Mother Lover-- you killed them off randomly). You plots are GOOD but you might want to be less impulsive when writing.
2- Get someone to read over your fics before you post them. You don't have many huge mistakes (like writing sentances that don't make sense) but they tend to run on. And make the comma your friend. The comma is my friend. Don't you like the comma?
Comma: *sniff*
Zanzou: *patpat*
But I really have enjoyed what I've read of your work. Keep writing and with time (and a beta! *snugs her Lysbeta*) you'll become a very good author.
And let me just say... having a beta isn't bad. Get someone you LIKE to do it, and they'll praise your work and fix it up to be all nice and pretty. If you have a beta already.... Sorry to say that you should get a better one. Preferably someone who's older and knows the series very well.
*__* My beta is very fun. She's a fluff writer, I'm an angst writter. She gives happy endings, I kill them off.
So that all said... You HAVE improved. Go you. *waves flag*
~Zanzou |
Reviewed By: BakurasMistress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 12:45 CDT
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oh yay! thanks alot for the update, finally, i had been driving myself crazy over the last cliffhanger.....only to be faced by this new one! aarrrggg!! (frusterated)lol, oh well it was good anyhow! please continue and update soon!^_^ ja ne |
Reviewed By: QueenOfGames On: June 22, 2003 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MEH SO SHORT! HAI! You go Ryou! lol Yami honey I love you but if you keep hurting my Ryou-chewy I'll have to KICKA YO ASS! muhahahahaha!! And you thought Marik was evil...... ::grin:: Yesum I loved it duh so yea hurry up with the next installment lol big word!!
hehe
The *Queen Of Games* |
Reviewed By: Zoe On: June 22, 2003 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...*sniffles* Poor Ryou!! *snuggles her Ryou plushie* But...this story ish great! I really liked it!! ^___^ *stomps feet on the ground* But...but...evil evil cliffhanger!! *runs around pulling out her hair and accidentally crashes into a wall* x_O
Yugi muse: Don't mind Zoe...she often does this kinda stuff with cliffhangers if she likes the story lots! *smiles in his cute chibi/innocent way and drags Zoe away* |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 16:10 CDT
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poor Ryou!!! I can't beleive that Yami is so cruel to him he needs to be shot and pissed on... ahem that was a little harsh. Seto needs to be hit over the head and see what's going on. Please update again soon can't wait to fins out what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Sausweet On: June 12, 2003 16:24 CDT
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Yeah Angst! |
Reviewed By: ashley On: June 13, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great fanfic and actually was the first ive ever read and so far my fave....but i wonder if chp.7 was the last because it felt like a cliffhanger to me please continue the story, it was getting so good too! |
Reviewed By: the red witch On: June 08, 2003 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story. it could be... uh? i don't know maybe a little better. I LOVED the linkon park that was so cool. i love linkon park.and i love the song you picked. email me if you have another fan fic. i don't care what its about just tell me. email me at sesshomarugurl00Aaol.com luv ya w/b |
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