| "Love Is..." Reviews/Comments [ 135 ] |
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: July 25, 2004 17:59 CDT
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hey im a new fan, the last chapter was kind of confusing, u you forgot to put whose povs were whose, but its a great story! hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: jink On: June 19, 2004 14:20 CDT
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Hmm I like this fic, better spelling than several that I've read recently, thank goodness. I look forward to updates!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (nsi) On: June 10, 2004 17:01 CDT
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many people seem to enjoy your fic, but I'm not going to lie. No offence or anything but I thought your idea was really great but your characters are too different and some act just totally different. It doens't matter thoug, this is just one person's oppinion.
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 02:44 CDT
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Addendum: I really hope the stalker isn't Souta...
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Reviewed By: jynnantonnix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am deeply and unrelentingly in love with this fic. The Kikyo-bashing is perfection, and I love how InuYasha's role is restricted to that of an immature puppy. Your addition of Kira as the inu youkai sister is surprisingly well done... the character is realistic and fine tuned. I am very impressed with the storyline! Impressed to the extent that I would really like to read more... sooner rather than later. And... get with the Sesshy/Kagome lovin'!!!! ^_~
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: May 27, 2004 11:27 CDT
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Okay so now the creepy guy wants Rin too??? You have got to tell me who it is!!!!! And why does Inuyasha want to kill whoever got Kira pregnant??? Why does he care??? And what did she say to him to have him running down the hall??? Soooo many questions!!!!!!! But it would be cool to see Inu and Kira getting along finally, and to have him realize what a slut Kikyou is and dump her!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: evil kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 11:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im the happiest person right now!!! you updated u really updated, i love u!!!! this story is my fav and the only one i actually remeber the title for lol. well im so happy ::hearts in eyes:: now my day at school wont be so dull and i have u to thank for that, yay!!! But there was on thing missing in this update and that is my LEMON!!! yes and that strange stalker guy, im guessing its naraku or something but when u update please dont forget my lemony goodness. whats gonna happen to kagome with the stalker guy. i have a feeling ur gonna have her kidnapped or maybe worse, dun dun dun. Well i just wanted to thank u and tell u how much i love u right now!!!!! -_
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Title: Love is A Gamble
Reviewed By: LadyNightshade On: May 27, 2004 07:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleas update your story!!!! I love it!!!!!And I love sesshomaru and kagome and hate kikyo, so this is the perfect fanfic for me! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! And who is the father of Kira's baby?
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Reviewed By: N.S. On: May 27, 2004 01:41 CDT
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Hope there is an update soon. It's really very cruel when the good authors end with cliffies.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 21:04 CDT
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Are you going to update or am I going to have to delete this from my fave list???
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
must. not. kill. author. for. ending. with. cliffie! i'm okay. just a little stressed that you just had to end with a cliffie. oh well. please update soon and remeber to say who's point of view it is when you switch. i was getting confused there. oh and your spelling was pretty good considering you don't have spell chech anymore. p.s. I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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Reviewed By: savahna On: April 19, 2004 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey loved it please finish writing again soon. I rated you an over all ten because it was really good even thou you did have spelling errors although i do to since i suck at grammer :) please write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, and the music in the story. I was a little confused about the whole wedding/pregnant thingy, perhaps I missed something? haha. Anyways, keep up the good work, I hope you update soon. Ciao
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Reviewed By: does it really matter? On: April 11, 2004 10:25 CDT
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i have sympathy for you, just to let you know and i know u haven't posted the a/n here yet but i can't review on fanfiction.net anywayz just thought i'd let ya know i still like your fic in fact half the time the only reason i go online is 2 see if u updated and although it is confusing you're the author and i'm sure most of the time u know what you're doing plus the chapter wasn't really bad just slightly confusing and of course it's confusing cuz we're not the author and we don't know whats going to happen yet and if any of the retards who complained had any brains they'd know alot of good books as well as fanfics are a bit confusing thats just the way it is cuz when u start reading somethig unless you've read it before you don't know whats going 2 happen and it usally comes together in the end. so thats what i have 2 say about that like it or hate it and if ya hate it well screw you all the more reason 2 review (not directed at author just the people that actually read the reviews and have a problem with what i say after all it's my opinion and i'll do what i want with it)
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Reviewed By: Minerva On: March 20, 2004 21:48 CST
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Hello. This story is so cute usually I do not like stories with characters that are not from Inuyasha, but Kira is a clever, independent, compationate,and loving. She is so sweet and is a trickster!!! Please update! Bye.
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