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| "Shattered Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Samantha On: June 02, 2004 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fic so far. I really hope you keep writing it and I must admit, that lemon was really well written.
| Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 06, 2004 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutly, positively LOVE your story! (But then again, you could probably guess that from my name...) Anyways, please keep writing. The descriptions and details in your story are amazing! And I have to know what happens... Please and thank you!!!
| Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She can not, I repeat, can NOT be raped. Mar says no, end of discussion.
Someone said they thought you were living out your fantasy through Andrea? I certainly hope not! First off, I hope you'd never want to be in her situation, and secondly, as a friend, she doesn't seem to be a lot like you. Got that everyone? Andrea and the author are not one and the same. That comes from a good friend. ^_^ I would know, trust me, I would.
It started off slighty dry. I'm not into necking and party scenes, but this new twist, the drama, has really got my attention. You can bet I'll be coming back for more. ^_^ I can't wait to find out what happens next, how Andrea finds her way out! Until then, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 02:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to start this off by letting you know I took notes so I wouldn't forget what I wanted to say this time. ^_^ Aren't you proud of me?!
We'll go in reverse order of the chapter. Hmm...*looks at notes on the back of the now finished The Sister Saga* Group hugs...give me a moment to gag please. ^_^ You know how I am about touchy feely, girly stuff. ^_~
Oh! My name is hippiechick. I wouldn't say anything about it except I leave it a little "h" for a reason. I feel that capitalizing it makes it a title, something special, elevated so to speak. I am little and meek. Lower cased. ^_^ (Sorry about that. It's just a lot of people have capitalized it and I've always lower cased it. Yes, I'm being picky and since you're my girl and wont' take offense to it *I hope*, I decided to tell you about it. ^_^)
You said I'm the best. Well, of course I'm the best! Duh! Doesn't take a genius to figure that one out. ^_^ Oh, and the help was no big deal. You know me, always helping. ^_^
Now, to actually review the story. (hehe. It would seem I got carried away with everything else.) I wanted to compliment you on how vivid everything was. I loved the descriptive terms you used. They really brought the entire scene to life. I was reading along and thinking, "Wow, this is leading up to what has got to be the best lemon she's ever written!" Then suddenly, it stopped! Just like that! It was over! That is so not right!!! You were teasing!!! You big meany!!!!!! ^_^ (Still an awesome job though.)
The other thing I really wanted to make sure to mention is that while I was reading this, my brothers were getting ready for bed. Well, they happened to be in the living room with me when I was reading about Nail and Kami talking to Piccolo. I totally started dying laughing, and I might even have woken up Daddy. (oops) Nolan thought I had lost my mind and walked over to see what I was reading. When I finally realized he was there, I turned to look at him and smiled innocently and said, "What?" He just shook his head and walked away. Now, that's not nice. Then again, neither was my laughing at Piccolo's pain and trau- Wait a darn minute. I feel inspiration for another Therapy session coming on. You're the bestest chica! Thanks!! Wow! This is wonderful!! *does happy dance*
Well, it's almost 3 now and I have to be up at 8 for a dr's appointment. I did want to mention my headache is finally gone. (Lasted for about 4 hours.) You really did a great job with this chapter. As far as you choice of wording, I think this stands as one of your best works to date. If you keep writing like this, I'm going to have to forbid you from reading my fics out of shame in the comparison. Oh well, that's a good thing. ^_^ Until the next update, Peace and Out. | Reviewed By: Credik On: April 13, 2003 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey itz my first time reading a Piccolo fic but so far itz pretty **** good.
LOL bout some of the smaller details "hercule and 5th" also about Piccolo attitude.
itz priceless
I'll try 2 review when u update again. |
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