| "When It Hurts The Most" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually the rating is more like 9.5 but whatever.
I had a weird dream once where I was a half wolf half kid and people were stalking me. They tied my family up in the basement and when I called home someone named Winnie answered the phone. I didn't think much of it at the time when I woke up. But when I told my mom, she told me that there was a person named Winnie in our family.
Weird, huh? |
Reviewed By: Saikono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, that's so disturbing. But it shows the reality that some kids have to go through. Keep writing and expose the truth of the tortures that plague smaller children with abusive relatives. |
Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: June 10, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you continue this soon! I'm enjoying this so much! I can't wait to see what happens!
~Shade~ |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsuen On: June 10, 2003 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello I'm back!!! No chapter today so here is another review ^_^ I relly hope you do get it up soon. And I know what you mean that review's make you write faster. Its the same way for me. Any way keep up the awsome work ^_^ Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Tammy-chan On: June 09, 2003 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! don't let that happen to him, and stop cutting off at a crucial point in the story like that! You are going to make me tear my hair out!
It's really good though. Hurry up and post teh next chapter! *waits impatiently* |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune On: June 08, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! This one was up FAST!!!! YAY!!!! I hope the other one is going to be up just as fast!!! I will be checking every day that I can. and every day that its not up I will put in a review to help you go faster ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS LEAVE IT AT A CLIFFHANGER! For once can't you give us the goods without makeing us beg! |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: June 07, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! Update soon!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tammy H. On: June 07, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about time! hurry up and finish it! I think that you write wonderfully, no matter what the subject matter...^_^. You have a very creative imagionation and I enjoy reading what you write, because it is good and I think for the shock factor. |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: June 06, 2003 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is turnig out great! ceep up the great work! Oh and i was hoping that in the next chap or soon that Bakura wil git to beet the shit out of his Grandfather!!!! Pleas dont let him get away with waht he is doing to Ryou. well anway i cant wate till the next chap comes! ....Later! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: mai_kujaku On: June 06, 2003 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is good. pls write more! it is fun to read! |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune On: June 06, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!! I have been waiting for the next chapter! I love it! I can't wait until you post the next one! and I will send in a review every day if I have to ^_^ well Ja ne and keep up the work! |
Reviewed By: Daughter of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
add new chapter |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 09:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops, didn't realize my other review sent twice...anyways, I'm sooo glad you finally got another chappy up! I can't wait for another! |
Reviewed By: Oni On: June 06, 2003 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so short! But it was really good. I hope you'll write a new chapter soon! |
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