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Title: Admirable
Reviewed By: Ryu Sachiko Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. I can tell that this wasn't going to end with them getting married and all happy ever after. They still need some more time. It was wonderfully worded and it was an elaborate and touching plot. Inuyasha was much more realistic in this fic, as he is always in ur fics. Please continue to write, it's a shame if you decide to stop. And too bad things like this can't be published, because I think you'd be up there at the top as a best seller! Ryu Sachiko Sama
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Title: awe struck by your work
Reviewed By: antisocial mint (not logged in) On: July 01, 2004 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am absolutely IN LOVE with ALL your fics, this one has kept me enraptured for a few hours, i barely moved out of my seat. the characters were so well rounded and no one was OCC at all. it wasn't sugary sweet in the least bit. thats why i loved it. it had grit, it delt with real problems...you are by far one of th e best authors i have ever had the the pleasure to read the works of. PLEASE continue to write because i would be EXTREMELY depressed if you didn't. =]
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Reviewed By: pop_n_fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:10 CDT
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Reviewed By: pop_n_fresh [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked ur story alot. It was original but u used things that happen in every day life. It was good that u did use something that happened in everyday life but u should have used ur imagination more. overall it was a good story. It was easy to read and it wasn't confusing.
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've just discovered this fanfic, and I've finished reading it. I have to say that this is truly one of the most frustration fanfics that I've ever read, and I admit, after reading some chapters, it put me in a bad mood for the whole day. I love how they characters are all still in character...and Inuyasha and Kagome didn't even admit that they loved each other. Gosh, some parts, I thought that they would! Hehe...nicely done fanfic, o great writer! *bow*
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Reviewed By: Amanda Galambos On: May 07, 2004 19:36 CDT
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Hey I love the way u started the story it seems really good its one of my first stories on media miner Iv ever read ummm... .. my nick name is reall just my first name and some wierd name I made up I really wanted to put inuyasha lover01 but it was taken :( O well I was wonderin if u could change ur font sry but it hurts my eyes but u dont have to cuz I keep readin and reviewing just the same ..:) Ja Ne :)!!!
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: April 09, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i dont think i've ever screamed at the screen so much, or so loud! i loved it! your stories are so awesome, please keep writing!! ^_^
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Title: Chanel
Reviewed By: Chanel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 15:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ur story kicked major ass! u had me hooked from the first chapter. i was like screaming at the computer screen for how stupid her mom was being. It was awesome!!!!! I can't get over it!
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Reviewed By: Guardian of Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 14:19 CST
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ooh....that was certainly one of ur more serious fanfics, but it was really good also! :) I'm think tat Denji got what he deserved in the end, that bastard! o, and anyway...great fic, and hope u update ur other fics soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Coralfang On: March 16, 2004 03:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good story.kinda depressing but good.anyway good luck keep writing^_^
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Reviewed By: (not logged in) Nagasaki On: March 13, 2004 01:21 CST
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i loved your story!
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Reviewed By: blue moo On: March 11, 2004 11:21 CST
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Hey, I have always enjoyed your stories, mostly as a lurker, but I came across something that has me a little concerned. There is a story that has popped up called 'The Father I've Always Wanted by 12blue12. This is the name it is posted under here and fanfiction.net. It is also posted at Adultfanfiction.net under the name Sarah. It is very similar to your story. Like the part where Grandpa disappears and the evil stepfather cops a feel on Kag's leg. Now I am not screaming plagiarism, but it is uncomfortable. My whole point is if she was inspired by your story, she should giv you credit or at the very least, asked if she could do her own take on your story. But I have read all of your stories. You are gifted and talented, please don't stop writing. I look forward to your next update of Dead Famous.
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Reviewed By: raaaaay On: March 09, 2004 22:10 CST
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wow. i shouldve heeded the warning. i was fuming mad at inuyasha for actually believing that shit denji told him! wow...im tired from all that screaming and yelling. its good she took her anger out on a maths teacher. hehehe. voicing my secret desire to severely injure my own. this was a great fic. i like your stories because the realtionships are believable. they dont just build up spontaneously. theyre slow going, and extremely frusterating. just like in real life. i like that. it makes the story all the more believable. great work. now im going to go read alll the rest of your stories! *has no life*. good luck with the rest of your work! (namely dead famous)
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 20:17 CST
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Oh mi god.. I loved this fic!!! ^_________^ Now update Dead Famous. ^___^o *lol* I can relate to this story though...My mother is currently engaged to this guy and he drives me MAD!!!....**smolder**~~LAter, phox
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Reviewed By: galene On: March 07, 2004 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
totally completely awesome! I love it love it love it ^_^ *saves link*
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