| "I Hate IT. I Crave It." Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: MichiruT On: January 04, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this fic, its gotta be my favorite Ryou/Bakura fic, you really captured their images in this story, anyone who has a problem with it doesnt know really good art =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Masochist Roni (my penname on FF.N) On: January 02, 2004 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just luv this fic! You are just so awesome! Anyone who thinks otherwise can rot in the underworld and be eaten by zombies! You rock!
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Reviewed By: Slv_&_Mstr_girl On: December 09, 2003 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the sadistic & masochistic pairing! I love how twisted Bakura was in the begining and then he was really sweet and romantic. I've got a picture in my head of Bakura and Ryou together on that hill together, with Ryou in his leather gear OMG 0-0 Sexy! As you've guessed, i love it!
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Title: Want More and Pic
Reviewed By: Sharon (yugiohgirl03 not in the mood to sign in) On: December 07, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
You got an excellent fic here want the fic that tells about their marriage and honeymoon. 'Specially the part where they rob Yami's tomb. Halirous. Want fic. will e-mail for it want more. I am also laughing out loud and dieing of it at the thought of Yami chasing Bakura after he finds out that he robbed his tomb. Perfect Fic!!! A+++++!!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: November 27, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew your pen name was familiar. I read your pg - 13 fic before. Isn't a sadistic and masochistic couple very dangerous? good thing they changed. This wasn't a humor fic but it was funny .. i'm just humor deprived.
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Title: PS to last review - I flaked--
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I was so hot-and-bothered I forgot to include my email address so you can refer me to the source pic: I'm at JennyNemesis@netscape.net. Great big lemony cheers.
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Title: Woof.
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww yeah!! This kinda thing brings out the cavegirl in me. I'm slobbering. You can never have too much S&M with these babes, so keep bringing it. That was INCREDIBLY hot. Would LOVE to have a copy of that picture. More slavery, more joy! Therapy be damned!!
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Reviewed By: darkgreylight On: September 28, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Please continue. Also, could you send me the pic that inspired this? -halfwayblue@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: B0nB0nCaTz On: September 27, 2003 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really sweet and i would like to read the thing about the honeymoon and stuff so keep up the good work.............
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Reviewed By: Carmen5 On: September 20, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is really good even though im not a great fan on lemons but overall it was really good , i didnt really the lemon parts but it was really really good all three of your chapters!
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Reviewed By: Mercedes_no_Inuarai On: September 14, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a tough critic, so don't take that "6" as a bad thing. ^_^ Actually, I really can't even GIVE an accurate O/C rating since this is the first Bakura-centric fanfic I've read. *L* So, ignore that altogether.
The sadomasochism in the first part of this series was freaky, but I made it through it and read the other two parts. The sugary sweetness of the final chapter especially made up for it. *L*
Your characterization of some characters (namely Seto and Marik) is a bit shakey (hence the seven on the SoW rating), though I do believe you got Yugi and Yami dead-on. ^_^ I'm not sure if I like the SetXJoey pairing that I'm seeing all over, but I can deal with it in small doses, like in this fic.
Good description, decent grammar, though you might want to start using a beta-reader to proof your fics, if you don't already. They're a good thing to have.
There were three things in this chapter I realy liked: TRyou getting pissed and locking Yami and Bakura in the closet, the conversation the two HAD in the closet, and Ryou changing back to himself instead of a clone of Bakura. ^_^ That last part especially. I like Ryou the way he is, not as some punk. ^_^
All in all, a pretty good fic. *goes hunting for more RyouxBakura* |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd like to read of their marriage. I loved it, i was totally speechless.^-^
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Reviewed By: Shads On: August 02, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You writing is simply amazing! This is one of the best YGU fics I've ever read. And the wedding/honeymoon fic would make a great read, so if you get a chance, please write! ^^ |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Wow. That was probably the best Bakura/Ryou fic I have ever read, and believe me, I have read a lot of them. I loved the sadistic elements in the first two chapters, and I love the sweetness of the second and third chapters too...a perfect balance!! Please, please, please write the wedding/honeymoon fic, I need to read it!! |
Reviewed By: Jonez On: July 18, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was really well done. It rocked! I would love to see a more in-depth story on Ryou and Bakura's honeymoon and wedding. Please keep writing such great fanfics! |
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