| "I Hate IT. I Crave It." Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Title: Want More and Pic
Reviewed By: Sharon (yugiohgirl03 not in the mood to sign in) On: December 07, 2003 22:33 CST
Comment/Review:
You got an excellent fic here want the fic that tells about their marriage and honeymoon. 'Specially the part where they rob Yami's tomb. Halirous. Want fic. will e-mail for it want more. I am also laughing out loud and dieing of it at the thought of Yami chasing Bakura after he finds out that he robbed his tomb. Perfect Fic!!! A+++++!!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: November 27, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i knew your pen name was familiar. I read your pg - 13 fic before. Isn't a sadistic and masochistic couple very dangerous? good thing they changed. This wasn't a humor fic but it was funny .. i'm just humor deprived.
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Title: PS to last review - I flaked--
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I was so hot-and-bothered I forgot to include my email address so you can refer me to the source pic: I'm at JennyNemesis@netscape.net. Great big lemony cheers.
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Title: Woof.
Reviewed By: JennyNemesis On: November 08, 2003 10:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww yeah!! This kinda thing brings out the cavegirl in me. I'm slobbering. You can never have too much S&M with these babes, so keep bringing it. That was INCREDIBLY hot. Would LOVE to have a copy of that picture. More slavery, more joy! Therapy be damned!!
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Reviewed By: darkgreylight On: September 28, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story. Please continue. Also, could you send me the pic that inspired this? -halfwayblue@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: B0nB0nCaTz On: September 27, 2003 04:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really sweet and i would like to read the thing about the honeymoon and stuff so keep up the good work.............
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Reviewed By: Carmen5 On: September 20, 2003 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi this is really good even though im not a great fan on lemons but overall it was really good , i didnt really the lemon parts but it was really really good all three of your chapters!
From Carmen5 |
Reviewed By: Mercedes_no_Inuarai On: September 14, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a tough critic, so don't take that "6" as a bad thing. ^_^ Actually, I really can't even GIVE an accurate O/C rating since this is the first Bakura-centric fanfic I've read. *L* So, ignore that altogether.
The sadomasochism in the first part of this series was freaky, but I made it through it and read the other two parts. The sugary sweetness of the final chapter especially made up for it. *L*
Your characterization of some characters (namely Seto and Marik) is a bit shakey (hence the seven on the SoW rating), though I do believe you got Yugi and Yami dead-on. ^_^ I'm not sure if I like the SetXJoey pairing that I'm seeing all over, but I can deal with it in small doses, like in this fic.
Good description, decent grammar, though you might want to start using a beta-reader to proof your fics, if you don't already. They're a good thing to have.
There were three things in this chapter I realy liked: TRyou getting pissed and locking Yami and Bakura in the closet, the conversation the two HAD in the closet, and Ryou changing back to himself instead of a clone of Bakura. ^_^ That last part especially. I like Ryou the way he is, not as some punk. ^_^
All in all, a pretty good fic. *goes hunting for more RyouxBakura* |
Reviewed By: XxAllisonxX [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'd like to read of their marriage. I loved it, i was totally speechless.^-^
--Ally Hearts |
Reviewed By: Shads On: August 02, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You writing is simply amazing! This is one of the best YGU fics I've ever read. And the wedding/honeymoon fic would make a great read, so if you get a chance, please write! ^^ |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O Wow. That was probably the best Bakura/Ryou fic I have ever read, and believe me, I have read a lot of them. I loved the sadistic elements in the first two chapters, and I love the sweetness of the second and third chapters too...a perfect balance!! Please, please, please write the wedding/honeymoon fic, I need to read it!! |
Reviewed By: Jonez On: July 18, 2003 03:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this fic was really well done. It rocked! I would love to see a more in-depth story on Ryou and Bakura's honeymoon and wedding. Please keep writing such great fanfics! |
Reviewed By: LonelyFox On: July 17, 2003 13:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was so sweet! Please do a chapter telling about their wedding and honeymoon...*dies laughing about them robbing Yami's tomb and having sex in his bed* |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 02:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I never pictured Ryou as a masochist, and I definitely never thought anyone could pull it off, but you did an exellent job of it! It'd be so cool to see the honeymoon scene chappie thing, too. And even cooler if this was continued with a lemon, pwease? *Chibi puppy eyes* Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Koori On: June 08, 2003 19:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
...Wow, you are a fantastic writer, I mean your plot, your writing style, everything, the fic is the best bakura/ryou I've ever read, I'll read all of your fics once I have time.
Keep writing. |
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