| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am looking forward to the next chap. I love your writing.
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Title: qustion
Reviewed By: anna_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2008 19:42 CST
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is there any more.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: November 06, 2008 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been almost 3 years since you updated D:, and also hope that u dont stop there. this is one of the best stories on this site XD, it's very well done. and i hope that u are well and nothing has happened to u. but i beg of u please update as soon as possible. Please please please.
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Reviewed By: yeeeee On: July 15, 2008 21:28 CDT
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really hope you just wont end this here ;_; it's been sooo long since last update. im in love with this story and hope youd post a new chapter soon!!!!!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to read how the ritual is done and what happens afterwards.
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Title: Great Story...
Reviewed By: nymphminxgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:09 CDT
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I love this story! I hope you finish it soon. I spent all day reading it and was SO disappointed when there wasn't an ending.
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Title: Better the second time!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 08:51 CST
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I don't remember if I've left a review for you or not; if this is a repeat just consider me ditzy. I read this in your original posting and liked the story then. Though there are still a few minor errors you have added depth and improved the grammar and flow. I know how the story ends, but I'm still hoping that you post the ending soon! I want to see how you've tweaked it. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582(not signed in) On: December 26, 2006 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noooooooooooooo!!! you can't end it there! (end of ch 17) *whimpers* PLEASE! *tries not to cry* sorry i'm better now. your story kicks ass! i'm really bad at writting reviews, but i just wanted to drop u a line and tell you i really like it.. but don't like u bc u left me hanging (ok i do like you.. i just want you to write another ch) keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 16:49 CST
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That was great! I hope you get a chance to update soon! I can't wait to see how this all ends.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 00:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so beautifully written that I didn't even realize I was at the last chapter until I went to click on the non-exitant next chapter link. You have to update as soon as possible. I thought the first version of this story was wonderful but you're out doing yourself.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 13:37 CST
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I absolutely loved this chapter. I love the tenderness and love that is just flowing off them in waves. I can't wait for the next update!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 08:41 CST
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Inuyasha's so cute! I love it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't remember if I've ever reviewed this fic before, but it's been bookmarked as one of my favorites for a long time, so I hope I had the courtesy of letting you know how much I like the story. It's so wonderful to see a new chapter of this! And such a great chapter, too! I particularly liked the conversation about Kagome being afraid, but Inuyasha being afraid, too. And of course Inuyasha's roundabout declaration of love. I'm looking forward to the next chapter with bated breath.
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: December 13, 2006 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a beautiful and emotional chapter. I was very happy to see this chapter. I had been afraid that this story had been shelved for good. It was actually in the top ten of a long list of many good stories that I check on a monthly basis. You have done a fantastic job. It would be so wonderful, if I could put this on my small list of great but finished stories. I will keep my fingers crossed. You have great talent, I think. Cynbad146, an avid reader
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Reviewed By: Faye V On: December 13, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I like the re-do so far. Glad you updated! =^_^= Alice
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 16:26 CST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: AnitaGrace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:08 CDT
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ha ha, Kagome raped Inuyasha. That's definitely a first for me when reading Inuyasha fics.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a TERRIFIC story. I see why it's been nominated for awards. I love your plot and characterization in this story. It is so well-written and draws you in from the very beginning. Excellent. And I will definitely be looking for updates of this one from now on.
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Title: An excellent fic
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic multiple times, even though I usually don't read unfinished stories. It's better written than almost all other fics out there. Fics this good are rare.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 15:56 CDT
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update this story please, it is too good toleave alone for so long.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 05:27 CDT
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Wow, I'm absolutely blown away. This is an absolutely fantastic story. You've managed to reach in and pull out some of the deepest, most heart wrenching emotions in all of the characters and with so much class too! Honestly, I was just absolutely sucked into the story. I swear I may have already reviewed this awhile back, but you deserve praise so here I am again. You've really developed the characters beautifully and I would love to have you continue the story (especially at such a critical time in their relationship). In all, I think you're a fantastic writer and you really must be attune to people's emotions to be able to write each of these characters so clearly. I also love that you've kept them in chacracter (the smile that Sess gave was flippin' priceless since it reminded me of the episode where he gets that little smile and Jaken practically craps himself, lol). Thanks for sharing this story with us and I desperately hope that you find time and inspiration to continue it. I look forward to your next update! Thanks! ;)
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 01, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am celebrating that you are back! This story has been in my top ten list for a very LONG time. I do not think that you have updated for over a year or close to it. However, I did not want to give up on the piece because you had such a wonderful story written in a most talented way. I will be glad to be your cheerleader if you get bogged down or sidetrapped; just let me know. Again, so very glad that your back. Wonderful, touching chapter. Thank you for sharing with us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:34 CDT
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well im going to assume that the epilogue you were talking about is never going to happen... so im going to pretend the fanfic is finished... GOOD JOB... i liked it a lot
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 14:40 CST
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'twas a great story.....but kinda short u no???? but anwuas it was awesome....keep writing.....write more.....and write faster.....Cheers
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Title: Kudos my friend, Kudos.
Reviewed By: IckyVicki On: July 09, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story line. You have a real gift for grabbing the reader's attention with witty comments and quite a fantastic romantic plot. I really don't want to sound mean or heartless or anything, because goodness knows I am no writing genious, but I just noticed a... lack of descriptions. Like their feelings of everything. But that is just my picky opinion. You are truly blessed with your writing. Keep up the good work! God Bless! Love Much Vicki
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Reviewed By: Shinryo On: June 27, 2005 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thoroughly loved this story, and hope that you update soon (even though it's been years. The story overall is extremely creative, something I would never think of. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tarialla On: June 07, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! Ok, I know you wrote this, like, eons ago, but please finish it! So close to the end... you said just one more chapter and an epilogue! *begs you*
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Reviewed By: momcitrus too lazy to sign in On: June 04, 2005 19:36 CDT
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Hurrah!!! What a wonderful storyteller you. Thank you for sharing, and for posting on mediaminer, which a much more user-friendly than adult fiction dot net. Again, thanks for taking the time and effort to write and post this very entertaining story.
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 28, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this fic. it's great!! and i really hope that you will write more chapters soon!! PLEASE UPDATE!! : )
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Title: Elemental
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 22:55 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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