| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 16:26 CST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: AnitaGrace [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 16:08 CDT
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ha ha, Kagome raped Inuyasha. That's definitely a first for me when reading Inuyasha fics.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a TERRIFIC story. I see why it's been nominated for awards. I love your plot and characterization in this story. It is so well-written and draws you in from the very beginning. Excellent. And I will definitely be looking for updates of this one from now on.
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Title: An excellent fic
Reviewed By: appelcline [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic multiple times, even though I usually don't read unfinished stories. It's better written than almost all other fics out there. Fics this good are rare.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 15:56 CDT
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update this story please, it is too good toleave alone for so long.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 05:27 CDT
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Wow, I'm absolutely blown away. This is an absolutely fantastic story. You've managed to reach in and pull out some of the deepest, most heart wrenching emotions in all of the characters and with so much class too! Honestly, I was just absolutely sucked into the story. I swear I may have already reviewed this awhile back, but you deserve praise so here I am again. You've really developed the characters beautifully and I would love to have you continue the story (especially at such a critical time in their relationship). In all, I think you're a fantastic writer and you really must be attune to people's emotions to be able to write each of these characters so clearly. I also love that you've kept them in chacracter (the smile that Sess gave was flippin' priceless since it reminded me of the episode where he gets that little smile and Jaken practically craps himself, lol). Thanks for sharing this story with us and I desperately hope that you find time and inspiration to continue it. I look forward to your next update! Thanks! ;)
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: July 01, 2006 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am celebrating that you are back! This story has been in my top ten list for a very LONG time. I do not think that you have updated for over a year or close to it. However, I did not want to give up on the piece because you had such a wonderful story written in a most talented way. I will be glad to be your cheerleader if you get bogged down or sidetrapped; just let me know. Again, so very glad that your back. Wonderful, touching chapter. Thank you for sharing with us. Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 17:34 CDT
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well im going to assume that the epilogue you were talking about is never going to happen... so im going to pretend the fanfic is finished... GOOD JOB... i liked it a lot
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2006 14:40 CST
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'twas a great story.....but kinda short u no???? but anwuas it was awesome....keep writing.....write more.....and write faster.....Cheers
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Title: Kudos my friend, Kudos.
Reviewed By: IckyVicki On: July 09, 2005 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story line. You have a real gift for grabbing the reader's attention with witty comments and quite a fantastic romantic plot. I really don't want to sound mean or heartless or anything, because goodness knows I am no writing genious, but I just noticed a... lack of descriptions. Like their feelings of everything. But that is just my picky opinion. You are truly blessed with your writing. Keep up the good work! God Bless! Love Much Vicki
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Reviewed By: Shinryo On: June 27, 2005 05:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thoroughly loved this story, and hope that you update soon (even though it's been years. The story overall is extremely creative, something I would never think of. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tarialla On: June 07, 2005 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
!!!! Ok, I know you wrote this, like, eons ago, but please finish it! So close to the end... you said just one more chapter and an epilogue! *begs you*
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Reviewed By: momcitrus too lazy to sign in On: June 04, 2005 19:36 CDT
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Hurrah!!! What a wonderful storyteller you. Thank you for sharing, and for posting on mediaminer, which a much more user-friendly than adult fiction dot net. Again, thanks for taking the time and effort to write and post this very entertaining story.
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Reviewed By: ayngel_babie On: March 28, 2005 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this fic. it's great!! and i really hope that you will write more chapters soon!! PLEASE UPDATE!! : )
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Title: Elemental
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 22:55 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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