| "Elemental: A Feudal Soap Opera" Reviews/Comments [ 129 ] |
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Title: Confusion??????????
Reviewed By: Lydia On: January 09, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was the best fanfic I have ever read. Where is the epilogue? Please tell me or I will go crazy with wonder. Thankyou for the wonderful story. Made: Jan 9 2005. Whats with the no epilogue. Very upset, please write it!
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Reviewed By: angel0fs0rr0w666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
AREMT YOU GOING TO DO AN EPILOGUE????????!!!!!!!!!!! you better do it!
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 22, 2004 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was sooooo amazing!!you know...that was the best fanfic of inuyasha i've EVER READ!!!! when i started reading it i wasn't expecting much, cause i kinda thought inuyasha would be in love with kikyo and thats what kagome would try to give him, but OMG! it was just so... like... FRICKIN AMAZING! and it was well thought out and the characters were themselves,cause you know sometimes the characters in the story are different than they should be, but you NAILED IT! and i know this sound really corny and gay but it was like i could feel what they were feeling and almost like i was there with them and i just looooved it sooo much! buuuuuut... im worried cause you haven't updated since may, and that leads me to believe yur not finishing it or yur taking yur sweet time. so pleeeeease for the benefit of EVERYTHING GOOD IN THE WORLD, pleeeeease finish it soon, yur killing me and i really wanna know how it ends!!! loli'll bother you until you do!!! again, AMAZING STORY!
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Title: a
Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love this story!! it was so good!
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait for the final chapter. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: ejqHorseLady On: March 15, 2004 13:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Please, oh please post the next chapter(s) If you don't then please e-mail them to me at ejqHorseLady@hotmail.com In case you can't tell it's EJQ NOT EJG
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Reviewed By: SesshomaruStar On: March 10, 2004 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Eru...For the thrid time.. On: January 17, 2004 11:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Wtf...Okay here is the rest of my update..Keeps getting deleted...Please update or I shall send my army of gummy bears after you with their marshmellow cannons!! ::throws a gummy bear at you for good measure::
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Reviewed By: Eru On: January 17, 2004 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Eru On: January 17, 2004 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please...please..update..anything...Something... DONT CARE WHAT IT IS BUT PLEASE! It's driving me insane..>
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Reviewed By: $eanpaul On: January 08, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on I really want to now how to put a story in this cpu
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Reviewed By: $eanpaul On: January 07, 2004 17:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i loved it,i have something to ask you. how do you get a story in this web, see iam new so just tell me! I have this story call Demons in black 2, and yes i did get the story from Men in black 2. see let me tell you the parts, frank the dog is shippo, agent J is Inu, agent k is sess(dose not work in the mail job) that girl that works in the pizze job(can't tell)the bad girl or boy is narku,and sidekick kikyo(not kikyo fan)the light of zartha(don't know how to spell it)is the jewel of the four souls, and that what i can tell you but wait there more, who is going to make the end sing to make her come back to Inu? 50 cent, SeanPaul, R.kelly, or Kelly? what song will they sing? you gess. if you want to read more tell me how to put it ni this web!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny aka BB On: January 03, 2004 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I AM SOOOO HAPPY! Finding this story has made my year! I had read it on fanfiction...and then i could not find it again.. I was so sad...so was my friend she looked everywere like i did... Then im searching forsomething to read and LOOK i found it! *does the i cant believe im such a lucky bitch dance* This story is really great..I gave the address to my friend so she can read it...Im SO happy and so will she be when she reads her mail....Oh yea Update plz!
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Reviewed By: Setryochi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@.@ *sniffles* so in character, so good... So... *cries* I love you! *cough* Um... well... I mean I love your story *nods* I do! ^^ it was great, terrific, wonderful, lovely, sugoi desuyo! ^^ Anyways, hope you get that last chapter out can't wait to see what other stories you may post! Set-chan
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Title: Cute Story, but what happened to the ending?
Reviewed By: Faye273 On: November 21, 2003 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic in more ways than one. It was a captivating love/romance story with a very origional twist. Their "hook-up" was surprising, which took me off guard, but I enjoyed it throughly. I was especially happy that although IY didn't know what he was doing, he did end up knowing that Kag wasn't Kikyo. The writing style was very descriptive but not overbearingly so, which I felt allowed the reader to create very accurate mental pictures of the scenes without drowning out the readers own creativity. I only have 2 complaints, so my first is some of the grammar. I must admit I have seen much worse, but the point should be made that revision of the story and check for homonyms and such (such as their vs. they're etc.)should have been better scrutinized. My other complaint is one I'm sure is said often... where's the promised ending?? It's a great story, but I would love to see an ending that explains all of the ramifications of this "soul binding" and see what their future would look like.
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