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| "Interactive Story" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 16:24 CDT
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PS: YEA DATES! teehee just HAD to do that. ^^ | Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 16:21 CDT
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Well! Great start I just want to say it's brown/BLONDE not BLAND hair...-- anyway *innocent from yelling*. I guess I cuold tell you an outfit to wear sometime. ex: blue jeans with brown coyboy boots white jacket of a white shirt. Or a white dress for a speacial fling or something. ^^ | Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 18:42 CDT
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Thankyouthankyouthankyou THANK YOU! ^^ I know I never said that who I would like to date but no yuri pairing on me now! I MEAN THAT TOO --Mel C. | Reviewed By: Nikki On: July 24, 2003 21:13 CDT
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I bet its gonna be great | Reviewed By: Franchesca On: July 24, 2003 16:04 CDT
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Font ColorYay! | Reviewed By: Meryaptemun On: July 24, 2003 00:40 CDT
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Name: Niykara
Age: 16
Gender: F
Cards:
Magician of Faith ATK/300 DEF/400 (level 1 effect)
Flip: Select 1 magic card from your graveyard and return it to your hand
Ookazi (magic card)
Inflist 800 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's life points
Bottomless Shifting Sand (Continuous Trap Card)
At the end of your opponent's turn, destroy the face up monster(s) with the highest ATK on the field. During your own Standby phase, if you have four or less cards in your hand, this card is destroyed
Just Deserts (trap card)
Inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponent's life points for each monster your opponent has on the field
Princess of Tsurugi (level 3, Effect card) ATK/900 DEF/700
Flip: Inflict 500 points of direct damage to your opponents Life points for each magic and trap card your opponent has on the field
Needle Wall (trap card)
During your standby phase, roll a six-sided die once. Treat your opponent's Monster Cards as #s 1-5, counting from your right. Destroy the monster that is in the same monsterCard Zone as the die result. If the result is 6, roll again.
Gravity Bind (continuous trap)
All monsters of level 4 and higher cannot attack. Their positions may still be changed.
Fake Trap
When your opponent uses a Magic, Trap, or effect monster Card to destroy your trap card(s) , this card can be destroyed as a substitute for your trap card(s)
Polymerization
I think everyone knows what this card is
Time Wizard (level 2 effect)
Toss a coin and call heads or tails. If you call right, your opponent's monsters on the field are destroyed. If you call it wrong, your own monsters are destroyed and you lose life points equal to half the total ATK of the destroyed monsters. This card can be used only during your turn, once per turn.
Baby Dragon (level 3) ATK/1200 DEF/700
Thousand Dragon (level 7 fusion monster)ATK/2400 DEF/2000
Scapegoat
Griggle (level 1 effect)
When this card if face up on the field and control shifts to your opponent, you gain 3000 life points. This effect can only be used once as long as this card remains face up on the field
Relinquished (level 1 Spellcaster/Ritual/Effect) ATK/0 DEF/0
E-mail me for the info for this card, the description's too long
Black Illusion Ritual (magic card)
Senju of A thousand Hands ( level 4 Fairy/ Effect) ATK/1400 DEF/1000
Just e-mail me for the rest of the cards' descriptions, this review is becoming too long
Rivals: Do I have to make up a character enemy or something? B/c if I do, you make it up.
Eye Color: Almond-shaped Light Brown
Hair Color: Flat, waist-length black.
Height: Five Feet Three inches
Skin: Tannish-brown
Ranking: Umm... I'll be a Regional Champion since I'm the best duelist in my grade! ^_^
Personality: Really smart, nice, sometimes cold-blooded, not really cheerful, when cheerful, she's usually hyper.
Again, e-mail me for extra details
mythical_dreamweaver@msn.com | Reviewed By: Princess of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please do my character
Name:Kmara Hitchia
Age:15
Gender:Female
Some Cards in Deck:Red Eyes Black Dragon, Princess of Tsurugi, Salamandra, Seiyaryu, Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl
Enemies:Anzu
Hair: Waist-lenght black hair
Skin:Tan
Rank:African National Champion
Personality:Outgoing, nice, and tough, but can get angry easily (especialy by Anzu) so look out.
Extra info: She is just like Kaiba but has a heart | Reviewed By: Michiru On: July 07, 2003 00:34 CDT
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Sorry, I forgot to mention something, Michiru loves to sing and walk in the pouring rain. She enjoys swimming and walking on the beach alone. Note: If she's not near and with Yami Bakura, she likes to be alone. Arigatou | Reviewed By: Michiru On: July 07, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Title: Put me in please
Name: Michiru Ryuzaki
Age: 14
Born in: Egypt
Gender: Female
Some Cards in Deck: Dark Magician Girl, Harpie Lady, Harpie Lady Sisters, Water Element, Enchanting Mermaid, Umi (Magic Card), Cosmo Queen, mostly water, magic, and female cards
Favorite Card: Dark Magician Girl
Enemies: Anzu/Tea (I hate her)
Appearance: Long straight blonde hair (Joey Wheelers hair color)that goes to her knees that curl at the bottom and her pangs slightly cover her eyes. Deep ocean blue eyes and light colored skin (like Ryou and Yami Bakura's). Bakura's height. Normally keeps her hair up in a high ponytail.
Clothes: Deep blood red or blue lipstick, ocean blue nailpolish. Where's tight blue leather pants and boots. A tight blue leather top that cuts of below her chest (Chinese neck line) and wheres a leather blue trench coat with no sleeves. Wheres small leather blue gloves on her hands (mainly to cover her ovum)
Rank: Top rank female duelist
Personality: Deep and mysterious, doesnt like to talk or be social. Yet she had somewhat deadly and murderous intentions to the people who get in her way.
Millennium Item: Millennium Ovum (its like a millennium eye that is attached to her right hand)
Extra Details: No parents or family, wanders the world, but decided to stay at Domino City for unknown reasons, though she says its because she's bored of moving. Loves to pick fights and loves to duel. Gets along with all the girls (Isis, Shizuka, and Mai) and guys, and though she doesnt show it, she has a crush on Yami Bakura (can she please date him in you fic?).
Thank you and please put me in, if I missed anything, let me know. Please email when you post my review up and when u begin to write the fanfic. Arigatou | Reviewed By: Franchesca On: July 30, 2003 14:55 CDT
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I love the first chapter! | Reviewed By: NobodysAngel621 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name Rachel
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Some cards in deck: Dark Magician Girl, Red Eyes Black Dragon, I can't think of any more...
Any enemies or rivals: Seto Kaiba
Appearance: Light brown hair tied back in a low ponytail. She wears a white blouse with a gray tie, with a pair of grayish, blackish(that does not make sense) pants. She wears a little diamond cross necklace. Her shoes are a pair of black sandals with the thing in between the your toes.
Milennium Item: the almighty Milennium Bracelet!The bracelet allows her to teleport and do other stuff.
ranks: Beginner
Personality: feisty, smart, obnxious at times(like sugar highs), acts before she thinks
Extra details: Rachel is mainly friends with Joey and Tea. For more info email me.
Thanks for reading my little profile. If you need more info, email me at NobodysAngel621@aol.com | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: June 12, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, not to be rude or anythang, but, when are you posting up the story??
Another Nickname: J or Jay or J.J.
Thank you!: Thank you! | Reviewed By: Chris On: June 01, 2003 01:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My name is Chris, I'm a 17 year old male, I have, among others, Summoned Skull, Dark Magician, Kuriboh, and the Exodia set (all in the gba), as far as enemies go I really don't have any, I'm a lean 6' lanky individual, brown hair, brown eyes, glasses. I rated the fanfic a perfect '10' because if I'm in it, it's gotta be damn good. | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: May 03, 2003 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, I'm begging ya, please put me in the story! Oh yeah, one more thing.
I'm skinny also, and have not yet "blossomed" yet. I'm just an average ten year old.
Thank you: Thank you.
P.S.: Make me Mai's friend!
Thank you again: Thank you again. | Reviewed By: Windwaker On: May 03, 2003 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoops. I'm very forgetful, make sure you had that.
Who I want to beat up in the story: Tea.
If I have to date, it will be: Mokuba (since I think he's ten, like me).
Hobbies: hanging out with friends. Mall. Putting pranks on people.
Thank you: Thank you.
P.S.: I wanna be Mai's friend!
Thank you again: Thank you again. | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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